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post May 2 2015, 06:07 AM
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So I decided to make a song about how I feel like at times, we're all becoming clones, or at times if you look around, most people are almost clones of each other, depending on what's cool etc.. this too a while to finally finish but i'm happy with the result. I got a new camera too so i can film my videos at home at a better quality. I thought i'd share it here. as usual feedback is great, tips to improve as well smile.gif
lyrics are on the video description since they're not easily understood .

Video of the song


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post May 2 2015, 06:36 AM
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Great song and as always your mix sounds killer!! smile.gif BTW good idea to put the lyrics wink.gif
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post May 3 2015, 12:13 AM
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QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ May 2 2015, 05:36 AM) *
Great song and as always your mix sounds killer!! smile.gif BTW good idea to put the lyrics wink.gif


Thanks for checking it out monica, i tried to focus on the mixing on this one. Plus i got a new bass I used on this so i think it helped!

QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ May 2 2015, 05:36 AM) *
Great song and as always your mix sounds killer!! smile.gif BTW good idea to put the lyrics wink.gif


Thanks for checking it out monica, i tried to focus on the mixing on this one. Plus i got a new bass I used on this so i think it helped!


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post May 4 2015, 04:43 PM
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Hi Enlo, that's a cool composition with very interesting guitar work. I like the concept of the lyrics, and I think that this tune deserves a videoclip! what about asking a friend to do some shots of you playing (and singing?) on a cooler place, and mixing it with some images that reflect the concept of the track?

PS: I love the solo section starting at 01:42. It's killer.


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post May 5 2015, 08:34 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 4 2015, 03:43 PM) *
Hi Enlo, that's a cool composition with very interesting guitar work. I like the concept of the lyrics, and I think that this tune deserves a videoclip! what about asking a friend to do some shots of you playing (and singing?) on a cooler place, and mixing it with some images that reflect the concept of the track?

PS: I love the solo section starting at 01:42. It's killer.


Thank you gabe, I asked myt friend about a video and we'll see what happens lol. I'd probably feel shy singing somehwere since i'm a shy person.


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post May 6 2015, 05:48 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ May 5 2015, 04:34 PM) *
Thank you gabe, I asked myt friend about a video and we'll see what happens lol. I'd probably feel shy singing somehwere since i'm a shy person.


It will disappear with practice so don't worry about it. You don' t have to necessary sing directly to the camera. you can be watching to any side and even playing your guitar too... think on it as a game, just for fun. smile.gif


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post May 9 2015, 08:54 AM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 6 2015, 04:48 AM) *
It will disappear with practice so don't worry about it. You don' t have to necessary sing directly to the camera. you can be watching to any side and even playing your guitar too... think on it as a game, just for fun. smile.gif


very true, practice helps a lot of things!. We're working on an industrial song at the moment actually smile.gif

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It will disappear with practice so don't worry about it. You don' t have to necessary sing directly to the camera. you can be watching to any side and even playing your guitar too... think on it as a game, just for fun. smile.gif


very true, practice helps a lot of things!. We're working on an industrial song at the moment actually smile.gif


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post May 9 2015, 04:14 PM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ May 9 2015, 04:54 AM) *
very true, practice helps a lot of things!. We're working on an industrial song at the moment actually smile.gif


That sounds interesting! I love NIN, do you have any influences from Reznor?


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post May 11 2015, 06:12 AM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 9 2015, 03:14 PM) *
That sounds interesting! I love NIN, do you have any influences from Reznor?


I really enjoy the song hurt, the johnny cash version as well. Although the industrial we're making will be more cyber metal sounding.It's his porject lol something new for me .


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post May 11 2015, 04:11 PM
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I love Johnny Cash's covers. He has some ability to add even more to very expressive songs. I like what he did with this one:



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post May 12 2015, 02:32 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 11 2015, 03:11 PM) *
I love Johnny Cash's covers. He has some ability to add even more to very expressive songs. I like what he did with this one:



i actually liked that one man, thanks for sharing. yeah he has a certai nfeeling he creates. Sounds like regret.


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