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post Aug 6 2015, 06:54 PM
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QUOTE (fzalfa @ Aug 4 2015, 08:42 AM) *
woaw......

what to do what to do..... is he in danger ?


edit:

hey dude i have something for you !

https://soundcloud.com/maxime-bon-3/birdman-3

Laurent


Nice take Laurent, love the melody and the mysterious sound to it.

Here is my take.



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post Aug 6 2015, 07:21 PM
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very nice ricky !!

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post Aug 6 2015, 08:11 PM
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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Aug 6 2015, 02:54 PM) *
Nice take Laurent, love the melody and the mysterious sound to it.

Here is my take.




Hi Ricky! Cool one! I like the vibe of this composition. The feeling here is similar to the one generated on Laurent's tune. It seems that you both get a similar vibe from this image. This one is more focused on lead guitar which is also cool, maybe less "soundtrack" style but more like a solo guitar album... great work!

Also, the overall sound/mix on this one is better. smile.gif


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post Aug 6 2015, 09:28 PM
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I don't know the film but from the picture he doesn't look like he is going to be attacked, more like the birdman thing is like a monkey on his back or an albatross around his neck, so I came up with a little single track piece that kind of sounds like he has something troubling him. I didn't want to make it too dark though.

https://soundcloud.com/gmcphil-1/birdman



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Great idea Phil! Your guitar effect fits great with the situation as well as the melodies created. I have seen the movie, (I strongly recommend it) and I can say that your idea could be included on its soundtrack.

The great thing is that this picture has maken you experiment with sound, and has been an inspiration to create fresh music. It's a very interesting experiment.


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Files without the noise Gab wink.gif

[attachment=42637:Spring_L..._backing.wav]

[attachment=42636:Spring_L...tar_only.wav]

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QUOTE (Phil66 @ Aug 7 2015, 03:59 PM) *
Files without the noise Gab wink.gif

[attachment=42637:Spring_L..._backing.wav]

[attachment=42636:Spring_L...tar_only.wav]

Cheers



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QUOTE (fzalfa @ Aug 6 2015, 02:21 PM) *
very nice ricky !!

Laurent



QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Aug 6 2015, 03:11 PM) *
Hi Ricky! Cool one! I like the vibe of this composition. The feeling here is similar to the one generated on Laurent's tune. It seems that you both get a similar vibe from this image. This one is more focused on lead guitar which is also cool, maybe less "soundtrack" style but more like a solo guitar album... great work!

Also, the overall sound/mix on this one is better. smile.gif



Thank you guys!!! Glad you like it biggrin.gif


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Ok guys!! Here we go with a new picture, this time the topic is: Shamans.

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HOOOOOOOooooooo

time to experiment some....... experimentations, hey !! i listen something !!

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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Aug 8 2015, 09:46 PM) *
Is this on the right thread Phil? ohmy.gif


Ooooops sorry Gab, I'll change it later today.

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QUOTE (fzalfa @ Aug 11 2015, 02:55 AM) *
HOOOOOOOooooooo

time to experiment some....... experimentations, hey !! i listen something !!

Laurent



Cool! smile.gif Shaman stories are always inspiring...


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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Aug 11 2015, 12:28 AM) *
Ok guys!! Here we go with a new picture, this time the topic is: Shamans.

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Very nice!!!! Lets see what we can do with this.


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post Aug 11 2015, 07:15 PM
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hey baby !! be pretty ,don't change your hand, it's coming !!

edit:

it's done in 3 hours, not without difficulty, i play differents track between play with my son, hard to kept an ideas flow.

everything is not perfect..... the solo is maybe not at the right sync , if notice something, tell me.

this is track

https://soundcloud.com/maxime-bon-3/shaman-bass-2-guit-fx-lead

maybe i'll rework the end solo....

Laurent

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Hey Laurent! This is a very interesting composition. It's a good idea to use tremolo as an expressing tool, it gives this a suspense feel. I also enjoyed the solo at the end.

The next step would be to polish your playing on this one. The main problem is timing. When using rhythmic effects (like delay and tremolo), you have to be very careful with the timing of what you are playing, if you don't go even with the beat, the effect won't go tight with the backing. This happens in many sections of this one.

The solo also has timing issues, and be careful with the bend.

If you polish timing, and adjust a bit the mix, this tune is appropriated to be published. Maybe with a youtube video, to start showing your music to the world. smile.gif


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thankx for listening

first of all, i must record the bass with a real bass, now it was done with a guitar and somes FX.

i keep this idea to do something more achieved one day, in a near future wink.gif

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QUOTE (fzalfa @ Aug 11 2015, 02:15 PM) *
hey baby !! be pretty ,don't change your hand, it's coming !!

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it's done in 3 hours, not without difficulty, i play differents track between play with my son, hard to kept an ideas flow.

everything is not perfect..... the solo is maybe not at the right sync , if notice something, tell me.

this is track

https://soundcloud.com/maxime-bon-3/shaman-bass-2-guit-fx-lead

maybe i'll rework the end solo....

Laurent


Love the effects and sound of you backing track, very cool!!!!


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wow !!

pretty nice

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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Aug 14 2015, 12:43 PM) *
Love the effects and sound of you backing track, very cool!!!!


Here is my take guys.



Cool one Ricky!! I love what happens in the background. The backing track creates a very interesting atmosphere that works as a very good background for your solo. This is top level as always! Thanks for your input friend.



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Thank you guys!!! Glad you like it. I have a concern thou. What happen to the other guys that used to participate on this exercises? . Have you tried to contact them?. It seems like its just me and Laurent participating. It feels lonely here.


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