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post Oct 13 2015, 11:27 PM
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https://app.box.com/s/fosbb9awkn0ek6bt87ww8ho9lajn1qwb
here's a little track , I looped it with my boss rc3..this is why im posting these, so I can compare them in 3 months.feedback pls
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Gabriel Leopardi
post Oct 14 2015, 03:18 PM
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Hi again! It's good to have this as reference for the future! Your playing is tasty. There are some technique elements that could be improved on this one:

- the pitch of your bends.
- the use of vibrato
- hands sync in faster parts
- I also think that your tone could have more presence, at least based on this recording.


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Todd Simpson
post Oct 14 2015, 03:54 PM
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I like the overall vibe! The tone is good as well smile.gif I would agree with gab on some technical elements that could use work. Also, do you have a soundcloud account? It's free. You can embed soundcloud tracks here @ GMC so that people can just click play and hear your track. I'd be happy to help you set one up if you need help. smile.gif

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https://app.box.com/s/fosbb9awkn0ek6bt87ww8ho9lajn1qwb
here's a little track , I looped it with my boss rc3..this is why im posting these, so I can compare them in 3 months.feedback pls


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post Oct 14 2015, 04:58 PM
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Thank you both for your feedback!
No question I need help in the above area's..
I really don't know how to use sound cloud I do have an account...I would like to know how to post my playing to YouTube, sounds scary, thinking of all negative feedback I may get...Thank guys.

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