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tflava
post Mar 23 2016, 11:35 AM
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Hello guys,

What do you think of this song?
I arranged the chords, made the text, sing the song and played the guitar.
I recorded it in a studio from a friend and he produced it. Hé alsof made the drums, keyboard and Will mix i't at the end.

Thanks in advance!

Greetz Tim:)



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post Mar 23 2016, 11:44 AM
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Hi mate !

From my opinion I really liked it when the vocals came in.

I found that the VST sound a bit "midi" on the intro, but after that, the vocals came in, and it's great.

Great voice (especially for that kind of genre) and the melody fits great with the guitar.

Great job mate !
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George Hlio
post Mar 23 2016, 11:52 AM
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I liked it a lot! You have a great voice too! Optimistic lyrics and uniting ideas...Family: all that matters
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post Mar 23 2016, 01:02 PM
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Hey Tim,

Congratulations with this optimistic song. It really gave me the reggae vibe of freedom, love and unity. Good lyrics and good singing too. Maybe keeping the doubling (or tripling) vocals only for the chorus would open the song more and also use some down/upstrokes here and there to give the guitarpart more life. Just a few thoughts mate ! smile.gif

Great job !!!! Nice Wah solo wink.gif


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post Mar 23 2016, 01:15 PM
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Thanks for the feedback guys!
Normally i dont sing but with this reggae song i gave it a shot for the first time
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post Mar 23 2016, 06:01 PM
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Such a lovely mood! Made my day Tim smile.gif So many good vibrations coming out of this tune. Well done smile.gif


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post Mar 23 2016, 08:31 PM
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Nicely done!! Your playing is very good and your use of chords is working great. I like the tone as well smile.gif Congrats on completing a tune which is a HUGE thing just by itself!


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Hello guys,

What do you think of this song?
I arranged the chords, made the text, sing the song and played the guitar.
I recorded it in a studio from a friend and he produced it. Hé alsof made the drums, keyboard and Will mix i't at the end.

Thanks in advance!

Greetz Tim:)




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post Mar 23 2016, 10:00 PM
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I like it too, I do have a thing for reggae, we have a local band called Steel Pulse. Check them out for inspiration wink.gif


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post Mar 24 2016, 03:08 PM
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I've just commented this one at the mentoring thread. You did a KILLER job here! I'm impressed! smile.gif


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post Mar 24 2016, 07:29 PM
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Thanks guys its nice to see that i'm not the only one who likes the song! smile.gif
And Phil i will check the band you send to me:)
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