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Caelumamittendum
post Jun 12 2016, 11:21 PM
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https://soundcloud.com/benjamin-storm-linnebjerg/of-sky-and-lightning

Not my best song or best recording, but this is just a demo, so not much mixing or anything done. Synth around 3:30 will be different in final version, I think. It didn't turn out that nice.

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post Jun 13 2016, 12:41 AM
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Hi Cael, I've just commented this one at the mentoring program. Check it out!


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post Jun 13 2016, 06:48 AM
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sounding good though biggrin.gif really nice riffs. I liked the tempo change, guitar was very tasty.
other than changing the synth part, are you adding anything else.... solo? cool.gif



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post Jun 13 2016, 07:27 AM
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Very cool demo. The part from 0:51 - 1:58 sounds truly killer!!! I think is the best part from your song, it's very well thought and gives a great mood. Also I like the fact that this part can be used with or without vocal. It depend in what area you want to go with this song. I like your ideas very much smile.gif
I'm also agree with Gabriel and I think it would be much better to make this song a little shorter. I have a personal problem with long songs biggrin.gif For me 4 minutes are the best proportion for a song to be sure that you will not loose the listener wink.gif
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post Jun 13 2016, 01:45 PM
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Thanks, Bleez and Monica smile.gif I don't feel like it's my best work, but I think I'll keep it anyway smile.gif


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post Jun 13 2016, 02:10 PM
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I like the direction it's going. It just needs to be fleshed out in some places to feel less sparse. After that, the length might not be a problem. Some ambience in the guitar parts might fit the feel of the song. Your playing is always terrific. And I like the title smile.gif.


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post Jun 13 2016, 03:38 PM
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QUOTE (Rammikin @ Jun 13 2016, 03:10 PM) *
I like the direction it's going. It just needs to be fleshed out in some places to feel less sparse. After that, the length might not be a problem. Some ambience in the guitar parts might fit the feel of the song. Your playing is always terrific. And I like the title smile.gif.


I agree it's a bit sparse at places smile.gif I might try and figure out something to add to make it less sparse smile.gif

Here's an updated version without the synth harmony:

https://soundcloud.com/benjamin-storm-linnebjerg/af-sky-and-lightning-no-synth-harmony


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