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> Take 2: Open Chords Rock Rhythm, Lesson By Gabriel Leopardi
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Shaneb
post Apr 13 2018, 11:07 PM
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Original lesson: Open Chords Rock Rhythm by Gabriel Leopardi

Here we go with the second take. I really like playing this lesson. Thanks Gabriel for the feedback on the last take! I hope i fixed the tuning issue and i know the timing is better. Enjoy!



Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=59147
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Gabriel Leopardi
post Apr 15 2018, 10:14 PM
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Hi mate!

Great job!! I can note that your timing is much better now. This new take feels better regarding groove and dynamics.

However I still note tuning issues in the higher strings, it's a bit better now but there is still a problem there. Please check if the problem is related to guitar calibration,. old strings, or fingers pressure.

Keep on the good job!



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Darius Wave
post Apr 16 2018, 11:56 AM
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This one is more groovey and more tight timing wise. It has less problemns with unwanted noises. There are still soem notes on the E1 string missing in the mix..maybe you need to redirect the point of pick stroke to accent more the highest strings than the middle ones. Or...you can take the screw driver and launch the clean channel to see if the pickup pole pieces are setup right. You have fixed mentioned aspect in a visible way but still not perfect. I belive you deserve to next grading point with what you did, but you need some more work to skip to a higher levels.


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Kristofer Dahl
post Apr 18 2018, 09:08 AM
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Nice improvement! This one feels tighter and more balanced.

As a further improvement, I would like to see your right hand get a bit more aggressive. Maybe using a slightly bigger movement and more attack. I think this would produce a stronger tone and convey more energy.

You get an 8 from me - keep up the great work!


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