The Dual Collab: Team Kris |
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Nov 23 2021, 09:31 AM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Nov 22 2021, 07:40 PM)  It sounds great Kris! I love how dynamic the drums sound now! Here you can download my distorted rhythm & lead guitars, and synth pad in case you want to add them there. https://we.tl/t-x2ClBoeNlF Thanks a lot Gab, all of these make the mix better ( I have used the synth pad from scratch, ads important harmony). Here is a new mix with chorus vocals. Just some random thoughts I have now: * I need to figure out how to make the vocals more interesting * same goes for the whole arrangement, we probably need many more fills. I might also need to find some kind of upper shimmer that I can bus all channels to. Maybe also get more adventurous with drums using Logics drummer. |
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Nov 23 2021, 04:25 PM
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I like the placement of the vocals so far.
I think the low guitar should be louder than the nylon string on Ben's melody parts. Gab's lead should also be hotter in the mix (it's such a beautiful part!). -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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I'm diggin this so far! I like the vocal arrangement as well.|
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Nov 29 2021, 03:50 PM
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Wonderfull !
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Nov 29 2021, 03:51 PM
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QUOTE (MisterM @ Nov 29 2021, 03:50 PM) Wonderfull ! Awesome you dig it Manu, I am following your thread with great anticipation as well 🤩 |
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Nov 29 2021, 04:48 PM
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Getting there!
The vocals IMO should stay clear of Gab's lead parts. There's plenty of space around the melodic material for the vox. I muted the tambourine parts in sections. I'll email you my latest version (obviously it won't have your lyrics on it). -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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Nov 29 2021, 06:37 PM
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Good point, I will experiment with a sidechained compressor where the vocals are overlapping Gabs lead.
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Nov 29 2021, 07:52 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 29 2021, 11:45 AM) Back with an update!! I feel like I need to tread carefully not to fall down a cliff here, but I absolutely love exploring this new style 😎 Any feedback is welcome! Also, there are lots of spaces for your guitar fills and arrangement ideas! Killer job!! I love the direction this tune is taking. I'll jam over this new mix to see if I can create some new fills and arrangements. I think that we'll also need a musical bridge once we reach the second chorus. -------------------- My lessons
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Nov 29 2021, 08:21 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 29 2021, 10:37 AM) Good point, I will experiment with a sidechained compressor where the vocals are overlapping Gabs lead. Honestly, I would arrange the vox so that Gab's lead is the only melodic part at those points. -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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Dec 1 2021, 09:57 AM
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Thanks for the feedback!
Here I have focused on improving the vocal arrangement and tweaked the tambourine: |
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Dec 6 2021, 05:56 PM
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Cool! I like the direction that this one is taking. I feel that the chorus needs to grow a bit more musically.. maybe the distorted guitars can be louder, or we can add a new pad there.
Also, how do you think we can continue this one? -------------------- My lessons
Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel |
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Dec 6 2021, 08:58 PM
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Agreed! I am working on an update - I will share it the coming days and we can take it from there!
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Dec 7 2021, 04:21 PM
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I'm digging the 2nd verse.
-------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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Dec 8 2021, 07:11 PM
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I'm gonna say "too much".
I like the idea of some slide guitar but it needs to be haunting and lonely and sparse for this track. -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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Dec 8 2021, 07:49 PM
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Yes agreed, thats my feeling as well.
I will give it some time to digest the current mix and then tweak/ clean it up some more! |
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