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Victafor
post Oct 8 2007, 01:18 AM
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ok so i learned the shapes from the steve vai lesson about a half hour ago and i thought i might post it so you guys could comment to see what i need to fix. Ive been playing for 6 months so keep that in mind as a factor of my progress. I did mess up on the last upward sweep but it doesnt happen every time. I had to use the 10th fret instead of 22 at the end cause i got 21 only

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post Oct 9 2007, 10:01 AM
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somebody rate....any advice?
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post Oct 9 2007, 10:15 AM
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nice! for the little "dinks" at the end, u could have pre bent the 21 fret up to the 22 fret sound and hit it... because it sounds as if there a little break before that

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post Oct 9 2007, 10:44 AM
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sounds good man. Damn i should really try sweeping


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post Oct 9 2007, 10:51 AM
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that was great biggrin.gif


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post Oct 9 2007, 12:25 PM
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It was pretty good, up to that last part, now the hard part is speeding it up!
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post Oct 9 2007, 01:00 PM
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QUOTE (Wyvernx @ Oct 9 2007, 07:25 AM) *
It was pretty good, up to that last part, now the hard part is speeding it up!


its up to speed with the song. its the steve vai in the style of. I can sweep faster than that. o yeah sorry ill post another vid where i dont mess up at the end

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that was great biggrin.gif


thanx

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sounds good man. Damn i should really try sweeping


thank you! you should. its my favorite technique biggrin.gif

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nice! for the little "dinks" at the end, u could have pre bent the 21 fret up to the 22 fret sound and hit it... because it sounds as if there a little break before that


yea i tried pre bending it but it doesnt sound that great and it is hard to pre bend on the a string, then skip up to the e string and pre bend that fast with the exact pitch.

any more feedback any1?

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post Oct 9 2007, 01:10 PM
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Sounds really good, mate! biggrin.gif
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post Oct 9 2007, 01:26 PM
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QUOTE (Flaringo @ Oct 9 2007, 08:10 AM) *
Sounds really good, mate! biggrin.gif


thanx a lot
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post Oct 12 2007, 10:43 AM
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any more advice from instructors?
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post Oct 12 2007, 03:45 PM
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Your on the right track dude smile.gif You could tell you messed up though so i would try and practice that same riff over and over again untill it's 100% down then re-record it for us.I can definatly tell though that you have been improving in your playing since the last thing that i heard from you so thats good.Keep it up!Only thing though i would try and make sure i had the riff that i was recording down before i uploaded it.That just helps to know exacly where your at.Trust me i've got a long way to go on sweeping myself


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post Oct 13 2007, 06:43 AM
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QUOTE (shredmandan @ Oct 12 2007, 10:45 AM) *
Your on the right track dude smile.gif You could tell you messed up though so i would try and practice that same riff over and over again untill it's 100% down then re-record it for us.I can definatly tell though that you have been improving in your playing since the last thing that i heard from you so thats good.Keep it up!Only thing though i would try and make sure i had the riff that i was recording down before i uploaded it.That just helps to know exacly where your at.Trust me i've got a long way to go on sweeping myself


yes i see what you mean! but if i have it exactly down, then i dont need to post it! I just post these things for any advice on how i can improve! But yes i did mess up in that last part! i have another vid where i didnt mess up at the end but one of the slides when 1 fret past the desired fret and its not as clean
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post Oct 13 2007, 07:17 AM
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QUOTE (Victafor @ Oct 13 2007, 01:43 AM) *
yes i see what you mean! but if i have it exactly down, then i dont need to post it! I just post these things for any advice on how i can improve! But yes i did mess up in that last part! i have another vid where i didnt mess up at the end but one of the slides when 1 fret past the desired fret and its not as clean



I see your point smile.gif
If you had it perfect there would be no need to rate the sweep.I was just really refuring to the last part though.You did a good job keep it up,i enjoy checking out your playing.


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post Oct 13 2007, 05:34 PM
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How can you tell it's perfect? wink.gif So re-recording is a good thing to do smile.gif

Keep practicing dude, it will get better with time! smile.gif


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post Oct 15 2007, 06:40 AM
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i think its good smile.gif keep it up man


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post Oct 16 2007, 08:15 PM
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QUOTE (shredmandan @ Oct 13 2007, 02:17 AM) *
I see your point smile.gif
If you had it perfect there would be no need to rate the sweep.I was just really refuring to the last part though.You did a good job keep it up,i enjoy checking out your playing.


thanx ill keep practicing

QUOTE (Pavel @ Oct 13 2007, 12:34 PM) *
How can you tell it's perfect? wink.gif So re-recording is a good thing to do smile.gif

Keep practicing dude, it will get better with time! smile.gif


hehe.. i will keep practicing man! sweeping is my favorite technique! almost done with your sweep etude! i just need to get the legato part up to speed! very close though

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i think its good smile.gif keep it up man


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post Oct 16 2007, 11:37 PM
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Once you are done with it, make a record and post here! smile.gif


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post Oct 19 2007, 09:03 AM
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QUOTE (Pavel @ Oct 16 2007, 06:37 PM) *
Once you are done with it, make a record and post here! smile.gif


i will biggrin.gif
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