Sacrifice, and another song i wrote...
muntahunta
Oct 23 2007, 04:28 AM
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Another song I wrote and recorded at around the same time.

again i recorded without a metronome for the same reasons as the last song.

ive done all the parts myself and would like some feedback on the guitar playing/singing/song structure... anything except recording really cos i was just learning how to.

thanks for listening biggrin.gif

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muntahunta
Oct 25 2007, 10:33 PM
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no one has any comments on this song? any constructive critesism would be great 'cause i like to work on my acoustic stuff and i would really like some opinions or critesismt to help me improve.
thanks
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Nov 15 2007, 06:58 AM
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That was awesome realy good job, and the song got a nice suspense!
Keep it up man! smile.gif

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Nov 15 2007, 10:43 AM
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I really thought this was a good recording smile.gif .Probably the best track i have heard on GMC not done by an instructor.Vocals were pretty good cou;d use just a very small bit of touching up but really good.

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Nov 21 2007, 02:02 PM
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wow thanks.
this song means so much to me and its nice to see that people like it.

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I really thought this was a good recording smile.gif .Probably the best track i have heard on GMC not done by an instructor.Vocals were pretty good cou;d use just a very small bit of touching up but really good.


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Dec 1 2007, 04:51 AM
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Great job man! I really like it.

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I thought it sounded very well put together and all that and you did a really good job singing. One thing you might consider adding to make it better might be a sort of bridge between the verse and chorus so you dont just dive right into that. Otherwise very good job!

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great song man...very personal sound..voice sound great

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Mar 10 2008, 12:41 PM
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I agree with the others, great song dude! Your voice is great and I really like the track. However I think it sounds like your voice is fighting the guitars for space in the song, especially in the chorus when the guitars get abit more intense. I don't know how you recorded the guitars but if you got the possibility to pan them out from the middle you might try doing that to get more space.


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It's got some Metallica influence in it? I would love to hear it pause, then build up to heavy rock. =)

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probably got metallica influence tongue.gif they're my fav band tongue.gif

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