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post Nov 23 2007, 01:08 PM
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This is the first song I'm presenting here on GMC and I just first want to say what an awesome site, I have been looking for something like this for ages(thanks Kris). My bands name is Gravelroad we are from a small African country called Namibia and I would love some comments on the song. Its really rough around the edges but we are still working on that... So please don't hesitate to comment.
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post Nov 23 2007, 01:12 PM
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biggrin.gif Wow! Groovy! I really enjoyed that, something different. Only thing I notice is the rhythm guitar gets a bit repetitive at points. Otherwise, this song is really nice and I bopped along to it. Thanks smile.gif


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post Nov 23 2007, 02:08 PM
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sweet! biggrin.gif
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post Nov 30 2007, 02:59 AM
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I really like the lead guitar part
also just curious what is the main language over there in namibia?


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post Nov 30 2007, 03:10 AM
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hmm i like it.. but i have mixing reccomendations smile.gif. Lead guitar (Up) Rythem ( down a bit) Bass(up a bit) Drums and vocals are fine maybe add a bit to vocals.. i think it would make it stand out a bit more smile.gif


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post Dec 2 2007, 11:52 AM
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Hi I like the song, its very nice..For bass being my department I have a recomendation..You have the rythm guitar playing the same progresion all the time.In order for not geting bored with it I recomend you to work on your bass guitar line..I'm pretty shure that if you add a walking bass line instead of playing just the roots the song will gain much and be more interesting.It does not need to be complicated , just few notes to get that walking feel...

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post Dec 3 2007, 01:45 PM
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Hey this is rocking, good work man! smile.gif


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post Dec 3 2007, 06:26 PM
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Definately groovy, I dig it! I would agree a little changeup in the rhythm and / or walking bass would help things some, but I like it - very enjoyable listen.


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