In short, this is really good. I read it once and it didnt strike me that hard, But as I thought about it. I realized this song could be seen from about a million different points of view. The female you refer to could easily represent ones hopes and dreams, lost loved ones, or an unaccomplished goal or some driven ambition. Excellent work, especially the end line "Is it?". Although questioning, those two words seemed directed at the reader, As if you know it isnt, but you are asking that of us as well. Good job.


Since most of the stuff you've seen from me is my Sci-fi side (Which is about 85% of what I write). I wanted to show you something that almost the opposite.

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http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=16239