Great take Jesse. The only thing I'd say regarding your tone is to maybe reduce the reverb a bit - it makes the sound more distant and weakens it a little bit - with it being a lead sound, it needs to be more upfront. I'd also highly recommend taking the tune to completion. The sweep, once you have the notes sits quite well under the fingers and is quite a nice one to get. Also, the quick AP passage later on is very doable since the notes follow a logical progression.
Keep it coming man - great job