Original, by Vasilije Vukmirovic, is located here.

Played on a Fernandes guitar into GT-PRO into Mbox into Pro Tools.

Unfortunately your timing is not good on this take, you are rushing things. Try to pay more attention to the drums or a click track and really make sure you play along with it.

Good take! You played everything nicely, but the timing was way off in some parts. I think you should be careful with timing, and lock to drums more. Other than that it was pretty good.

The timing in this lesson is not easy,

I think that´s the most valuable thing to learn here though,

I agree with Ivan and Marcus, work on the rhythm. Try subdividing the rhythm in your head. To me singing it helps me a lot.

6 on this one man, keep at it!