Hello GMC!
Here's my take of "Making Great Leads the Easy Way", by David Walliman (level 2).
I used Ibanez Prestige RG 2570MZ guitar and a Line 6 POD 2.0.

The original lesson is this one.
Making Great Leads the Easy Way - David Wallimann


Here's the vídeo:
Tyson - Making Great Leads the Easy Way

Thank you
Miguel

notes are correct, and in place,

There's good rhythm, which is the hardest part to get.

There's a problem with tuning of the guitar. Or it might be intonation. But this is crucial, so make sure you pay attention to that before recording.

Hi Tyson,
It's good to see you in the REC program.

Daniel is right about the intonation problem . . .
You have a relaxed vibrato, that already sounds well and I'm sure you can develope in this topic, because you have good sense for it as far as I can hear.
Check out Ben Higgins' Vibrato odyssey series, that will help a lot . . .

I'm waiting for your next video,

Take care !

Very good take. Try to work on the timing a bit more and to have the lines played smooth. For example on 0:28 phrase you are rushing on the last note etc... Overall its a bit different from original in place to place (in terms of timing) but its a really tricky lesson for that so this is a good take.

so close on this take man, deserves another shot, 7.3