Hi mate! It's great to see you rocking my lesson!
If we divide the lesson in 3 sections we have:
1. The first melodies: I think that this part is played perfectly.
2. The power chords: This section sound good but you should concentrate on going tighter with the drums. There are some parts that sound a bit out of timing.
3: The solo: The solo is ok. The tone should have a bit more sustain. Some bends don't reach the correct pitch. And also you should try to pick stronger the double string ideas to make both strings sound at the same level.
With those details fixed you'll have a flawless take. Keep on rocking!