I'd love to add some recordings but I'm without gear and am having trouble sifting through the millions of options. So until I make a decision here is a midi file of a metal song I'm writing. It's not complete, and doesn't feel as fluent as I'd like, but I think it's a good base (At least it's real fun to play). Suggestions, criticism, insults, etc are all welcome.



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nice sound. good rhythm. be interested to hear it without background and digital effects also.

I'm not quite sure what digital effects your refering to (I didn't add any), but I could take out the bass and drum lines if that's what you mean.

pretty cool with the drums and stuff.

I would like to hear a natural played version too.
Maybe you could also add some pieces in like a guitar solo or some other things like verses, what you want. That would make it sound more interesting

btw want some VAN HALEN?

hehehe

I thought it sounded cool! I think the drums made it sound really neat, and you could improve it by adding more of a variety in there, like a solo or bridge or something. But overall that was good! oh and by the way, what was creating that noise in the background in the start?

i loved it!!! great work