I think You could get more power from the picking hand and then a little less drive. Sound is very warm (that's great) but a little to muddy in the muted parts so the contrast between open and muted string is not clear enough. I see Your pretty known to the left and right hand correct work as it goes for muting unwanted noise/strings so If You add more power from the hand and keep i little more solid timing it would be perfect
I would also be carefull with the tuning - seems like there are some dissonances with open strings. Overall those flaws don't disturb that much and for me You passed
nice work Renan!