Original lesson: Iron Maiden For Beginners by Gabriel Leopardi

About 0:15 something weird happened - something went out of tune. Pretty nice timing through most part but there are moments You should improve. I think it could be a matter of down stroke and upstroke organizing for each note especially in the end after 1:00. Seems like You're not always shure which way to stroke the string. Anyway Your right hand looks pretty confident and that's good

Hi man! Good take! You are on the right path with this one. It only needs some little adjustment in parts like 00:15, 00:19, 00:43 and some connections between the different parts. Also the power chords starting at 00:20 could be played tighter. Work on these parts and keep on playing the whole thing to feel more comfortable and relaxed while playing it.

Hello there!

Darius and Gabe have already observed the moments in your take where you should work on in order to improve it, so just take the time, practice slower and then re-record it when it's ready! I am looking forward to grading the next improved take!

Cosmin

Almost there, 7