Hi mate. Your take has timing issues in the first two phrases (from 00:02 to 00:10), then you start to play tight. Besides this, I think that the last tapping is close but still needs some practice to sound precise, it should sound clearer. Keep on the hard work!
Cosmin Lupu
Apr 18 2013, 09:11 AM
Hey mate, I think it's slowly building up, but you still have work to do. Aside from Gabe's observations, I will add the fact that around sec. 09 - that bend could sound smoother. I know there's a lot to work on vibrato when you need to execute it to continue a bend, so I would ask you to take a look at this lesson - it has a slower tempo and focuses exclusively on articulation, without any other techniques getting in the way. Once you will get this one down, no bend should ever bug you again
The "too high pitch bend at 0:9" is a same problem You had in the first take. I'm afraid You still need to work on this one. Try to focus more strength to go throught ending tapping lick. It's not gonna be precise If You will be too relaxed
Piotr Kaczor
Apr 21 2013, 08:56 AM
Everything was said already First of all you have to work on timing and the next take will be great. Cheers.
Fran
Apr 22 2013, 11:53 AM
Almost there, 7
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