Hiiii there !
I'm afraid You need to make Your guitar solo track a few dB's louder so we could give You full feedback. Now Your solo is hidden under the backing guitars. 0:!6 is not confident enought - something wrong with the picking hand. I think You could play this whole thing a bit harder
Also the are some timming missing with the guitar that playes doubled track with the solo. Also check the link below the video - You gave a link to the classic punk lesson not to the same lesson You show here
Try to redo the take and post one more cause it seems like You're very close to how this can be done
Cheers!