Hey Nike! First of all I like Your attitude and will to work
)) You're gonna be a great player someday You'll see
But...Have some patience and wait for other two instrucotrs advices on Your first take. Someone else could catch some additional details and overall help from at least 3 instructors will be more efficient.
For now...It's cleaner (less noise) and I hear the improvements in the bending pitch but the are still problems...this time in other places like 0:29 and 0:42 to 0:50.
I think You need to give Yourself more time with this lesson and maybe even do some break / other lesson for bending to get more precise in it. Some of the skills of guitar playing won't come that quickly
Ear training and mastering the mechanics of bending is time taking and works best if trained on a few different fields.
What I can suggest is to use some kind of headstock tuner and watch it while bending notes. You can practice with the slowest backingtrack for this lesson. This will give You the time to correct the pitch.
I hope this will help You a bit
Even most talented people had to spend some time to polish their skills....so do not ruch, take as much time as You need