Hi mad! This is a very good take! There are some little details to improve to make this one a perfect take. I can note some little timing issues in the main riff (the one that combines palm muting with octave chords), so keep on practising this part to make it sound tighter. There are also some little details to improve at 00:50, and 01:03, but nothing very serious. I think that you will get a 10 soon.
Cosmin Lupu
Oct 15 2013, 02:15 PM
Marc I am so happy you posted this lesson You have worked hard and it will only get BETTER! You know my comments as I wrote them in your thread, so push a bit more to get this as close to perfection as possible
Keep rocking!
Cosmin
Ben Higgins
Oct 15 2013, 07:43 PM
Very good take, Marc. Really nice chunky tone as well
Like Gab, I'd highlight the timing issues in the main riff mostly. Just a little bit in front of the beat in some places. Overall, though, a strong performance with good palm muting.
Darius Wave
Oct 16 2013, 08:46 AM
Very good take - nice tone match, very good both hands mechanisms, clean, in tune - overall effect - very descent. Well done!
Fran
Oct 17 2013, 07:28 PM
Pass: 9
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