Hey Tim,
I think you are almost there mate
But this take, is not as good as the last one you have shown me while working on things - you rushed things, in order to post it in the REC
See, in example 2 you are a delaying a bit in respect to the timing and in example three you are missing two strokes - 0:26 and 0:29.
Please take care of these details, deal?
Cosmin