Very good advice from Gab. You could try some more phrasing lesson. You technique is already pretty good - just a bit more practice to get perfect precision but the skills You have at the moment are great though
It's visible when You focus on bends pitch and You've got descent pitch hearning. Somehow a few notes still keep a bit off the pitch. Maybe it's even just a matter of a few more takes, more focus and some playback volume adjustments to make sure You have a good pitch reference
Some more phrasing lessons will make You feel more comfortable over playing less notes. Players who are used to dense playing very often have problems to not "over react" while playing slow runs...for example many of them does very nervous vibrato. This lesson is great to develope thos skills
Congrats on great take