Original lesson: Teutonic Thrash Metal: Destruction Style by Gabriel Leopardi

just to stay in shape... :-)

Very good! Tight picking and palm muting. Around 0:39-0:41 are some tiny timming issues but that's all I found. Excellent performance and clean playing. Well done

Killer playing mate! Nothing to add to Darius comment, you rocked this one. It's a good lesson to keep our metal rhythm skills in shape.

Cheers!

There are minor timing issues and glitches such as sliding the power chord shape at 0:28.
If you'd like to get this one perfect, I'd suggest revisiting the riff at 0:34-0:44 to get it a bit smoother. It's a tricky riff to play and you are literally almost there. Although I like your tone overall, it does sound a bit too bassy in comparison to the tone Gab has in the lesson. Try adding a bit of brightness on the amp by tweaking mid and treble frequencies and possibly killing some bass. Overall - very strong take man!

Pass: 9.3