Is that an actual recording of you playing? if yes then I'm very impressed about how even sounding you'r notes come out!
It's a nice little idea, which you could use for some song.
ha thats power tab
my tapping notes do sound very clean but the sweeps are a little dirty so im working on that. 150 bpm 16th note sweeps are a little hard for me atm
I think that's just powertab playing it out for him.
Anyway, you had some cool sequences in there, but as DeepRoots said, try to resolve your musical ideas instead of just abruptly ending them. A good way to do this is just to play 7-1 single notes (7th note in the scale followed by the 1st note) to get back to where you started. Of course there are many ways to do this, play around until you find something that fits.
actually i changed around the tapping so that it matches the sweeping and i think it sounds a little better!