Original Lesson - http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guitar/blue-note-in-a/

Fender American Stratocaster Plus
Line 6 Guitar Port
Sony Vegas Video - Video pre-mix processing
Garageband
Guitar Rig 3
Marshall Pure Model
Logitech Pro 9000
iMovie - Video post-mix processing
Oven Mitts Courtesy The Kitchen Centre

Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 4.5
Feel 4
Posture 4.5
Sound 4

well man, that was a nice take! good job.
there´re some problems with bending notes. they are not completely tuned. pay attention on that.
also, perhaps a little bit more of gain or drive to your sound. but this´s just from my point of view. I´m not the correct guy to talk about blues XD

Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 4.3
Feel 4
Posture 4.5
Sound 4

Timing was much better this time!
However you still need to slightly bend all those minor 3rds (C note) in main theme.
And as for tone, I would even apply less drive BUT more power in picking notes,
you've played everything kind a flat picking wise,
let some energy comes in.

Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 4
Feel 4
Posture 4.5
Sound 4

Tom this was nice take there are some things that need work. What I noticed was vibrato (its too shaky for this lesson), bending and phrasing. Bending was flat most of the times and some rhythms were cut of or not executed fully.
I am sure with more work on this one you can get all fives. Again, it might be REC button fever

Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 4.3
Feel 4
Posture 4.3
Sound 4

Everything has been said pretty much. You need a bit more work on all the things mentioned and we would surely rate it with some fives.

Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4
Sound - 4

81.52%, nice job. (pass)