Hi Chris! Welcome to GMC and congrats on your first REC take!
It's true that there are some techniques that require more work, but the overall balance is positive. You can play the whole solo at tempo, tight and clean. Your alternate picking and sweep picking technique look and sound good here.
The main problem here is your bending and vibrato techniques. As you've noticed, the pitch of your bending is not precise and your fingers don't look comfortable most of the times. On the other hand, vibrato is not consistent and most of the times weak and unnatural.
For practicing bending and vibrato, I recommend you to give a try to this lessons:
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Beginn...String-Bending/http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Bens-Vibrato-Odyssey-5/and combine this work with any melodic solo lesson that incorporate these techniques into phrasing, like for example this on:
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Winter-Tune/Ok mate, hope to see more takes from you here. Keep on the hard work!