Another Jam, would like your opinion again |
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Another Jam, would like your opinion again |
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Sep 15 2008, 01:13 PM |
Or anyone's critic.
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Sep 15 2008, 01:18 PM |
Some really good picking and tapping here!
I would just work a bit on timing, few slower parts are not so solid rhythmic wise, maybe you just need to set backing louder then your guitar while recording, everything else was pretty nice. -------------------- Youtube
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Sep 15 2008, 01:28 PM |
None of them sucked,those are your words
Few of slower notes are a bit "off" beat, that issue happens when you don't hear backing loud enough and you're focusing on what you're playing only. So my advice would be to turn backing louder, lister to it more and try to record same thing once more,see the result. -------------------- Youtube
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Sep 15 2008, 02:24 PM |
Well first idea I get is smaller gaps in playing,
constant shreddy lines and playing might get boring pretty fast, but with some breaks/gaps it would be surely more interesting. Those gaps aren't easiest thing to thrown in for sure but give it a try. -------------------- Youtube
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Sep 15 2008, 04:45 PM |
I didn't quite understand what you mean by gap...? In what aspect? Gap means break,like a breath, but breath that has a meaning in music sense,not just like that. I hope this time it was more clear -------------------- Youtube
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