Hey Shattered,
Great improvement from the last take
Let me see if i can help you a bit with some problems you are having.
Lets first address the timing issues.
In the first section of the solo part the first lick is correct timing. The problem is going into the little bit at :35 your rushing into that section your actually playing it at the right speed but your starting on the wrong part of the measure. If it helps you think of it this way, after the triplet note lick after you stop the note on the 7th fret of the D string, either internally. Or out loud just say "One" and then start the next section i know its a rather odd timing, think of it as a hiccup between the two licks. But like i said if it helps just say "One" then go. Most of the timing issues you have shortly after that section is because you jumped the gun on that part and the ending of that phrase loop is not falling where it should.
Another timing issue is at :50 the lick has the same triplet gallop as the very first lick of the solo part. After this section that uses the diminished shape to the double stop bend. Again after you stop the end note of the diminished pause for one count then do the double stop. The other thing is make the notes of the double stop ring a little bit more before bending up and make the bend up is slower.
Ok, the next section after the double stop bend, again we here have pauses that your rushing just a little bit. Just like in the other sections i think if you out loud or internally count 1 before each note, so it would be like
Double stop "One
Note (stop) "One"
Note (stop) "one"
i hope i am not confusing you.
Your getting better, if you have any issues about the solo section that you need help with PM me or post here i will help where i can.
Daniel
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