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Gert1973
Jul 20 2023, 03:07 PM
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From: Antwerp, Belgium
Hi Monica,

Yesterday I started studying the first video and I have problems to see what's really going on and how some notes are executed. I have tried to lower the video speed at 50% but even then it goes too fast. So I will write down underneath step by step what I think is going on in the first 2 bars:

1) Downstroke B-string 10th fret and bend up full tone (in the main video he does vibrato 6 oscillations but not in the slow video) and hold.
2) Downstroke B-string with full release (or half release? I can not see it clear) of the B-string and then bend up full tone again and bring it back down.
3) Pull of B-string 10th fret with ring finger and play note on 8th fret B-string (play note with index?)
4) The note from 8th fret to 7th fret on B-string is unclear to me how he does that. He's not picking the string so I'm guessing pull off and I think he also does a slide. But on the TAB there's not slide mentioned. This is the part I really can not see what's going on.
5) Downstrike G-string 7th fret with middle finger and slide to 9th fret + vibrato (4 oscillations)
6) Then he does a slide on G-string from 9th fret to 2nd fret without picking the G-string. But it looks like he touches the G-string with his pick?
7) Downstrike G-string index finger 2nd fret and bend twice half tone up.
8) On second bend hold and pick G-string again, release bend with pull off with index G-string
9) Downstrike D-string middle finger on 4th fret and slide to 5th fret D-string + vibrato 7 oscillations

There's a lot going on in these 2 first bars laugh.gif

I have quickly looked at the other video's 2-6 and it seems more clear how everything needs to be played.


Cheers,
Gert

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Gert1973
Oct 3 2023, 04:11 PM
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Hello Monica,

Guess what... I went in against your order to raise the tempo tongue.gif

Before I'm going to raise the tempo, I wanted to fix the issues that you pointed out first wink.gif

So I did some work on the issues at 70bpm and I think I solved them (mostly biggrin.gif )



Analysis:
0-1.00: don't have issues here
1.11: did I let down this bend slow enough?
1.20: I think this part has improved well
1.23-1.25: this part also sounds better
1.26: maybe this note is played too soon?
1.42: I have worked on the timing of this note. Is it good now?
1.55-2.04: I have tried not to rush the last slides now
2.05: I stopped the note now
2.10: unfortunately I could not let the fat cat sing at the end laugh.gif (no sustain left rolleyes.gif )


I think this take is an improvement and from my point if view the main issues are fixed.


Let me hear what you think wink.gif


Have a great evening!

Gert

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Oct 3 2023, 05:34 PM
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QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Oct 3 2023, 03:11 PM) *
Hello Monica,

Guess what... I went in against your order to raise the tempo tongue.gif

Before I'm going to raise the tempo, I wanted to fix the issues that you pointed out first wink.gif

So I did some work on the issues at 70bpm and I think I solved them (mostly biggrin.gif )



Analysis:
0-1.00: don't have issues here
1.11: did I let down this bend slow enough?
1.20: I think this part has improved well
1.23-1.25: this part also sounds better
1.26: maybe this note is played too soon?
1.42: I have worked on the timing of this note. Is it good now?
1.55-2.04: I have tried not to rush the last slides now
2.05: I stopped the note now
2.10: unfortunately I could not let the fat cat sing at the end laugh.gif (no sustain left rolleyes.gif )


I think this take is an improvement and from my point if view the main issues are fixed.


Let me hear what you think wink.gif


Have a great evening!

Gert

Hi Gert!

Hahaha...if you didn't feel ready to raise the tempo, it's not a problem. biggrin.gif We can spend more time at this speed.

You are right, from what I see, some of the issues have been solved. That's awesome!!! smile.gif

0:11 - wrong bend (too low)

0:47 - this bend doesn't have a perfect pitch

1:06 - the last B note (12 fret/ B string) can't be heard

1:07 - this bend has a lower pitch than it should be. At 1:09 you played this bend correctly.

1:11 - you let down the bend slow enough but you played this release too early and that's why you failed the timing in this spot.

1:25 - wrong timing. You played the first notes earlier than you should.

1:42 - the slide from D to E ( G string/ 7th to 9th fret) is not played correctly. You need to play this a little faster and without putting accent on the D note.

1:54 - 2:02 - all these slides don't sound perfect yet. You need a little more precision when you play on higher frets.

2:04 - this detail is played very beautifully. You respected the timing and the note is stopped now. Awesome!!! smile.gif

Your playing gets better and better. Great work!!! smile.gif

For next time, try to fix all the issues that I pointed out.

Have a great evening!

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- Gert1973   Winter Ballad   Jul 20 2023, 03:07 PM
- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Jul 20 2023, 02:07 PM) ...   Jul 20 2023, 04:24 PM
- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, It took me a while to post a first tak...   Aug 18 2023, 03:39 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Aug 18 2023, 02:39 PM) ...   Aug 18 2023, 05:13 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hello again Monica, A new take on the first bars ...   Aug 24 2023, 03:19 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Aug 24 2023, 02:19 PM) ...   Aug 24 2023, 05:34 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, The past days I focused on timing on t...   Aug 29 2023, 04:30 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Aug 29 2023, 03:30 PM) ...   Aug 29 2023, 05:29 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, The journey with this lesson continues...   Sep 11 2023, 04:45 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 11 2023, 03:45 PM) ...   Sep 11 2023, 05:58 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, Here's a new take on this beautifu...   Sep 18 2023, 04:54 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 18 2023, 03:54 PM) ...   Sep 18 2023, 06:13 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, Today I achieved something you have no...   Sep 20 2023, 09:40 AM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 20 2023, 08:40 AM) ...   Sep 20 2023, 10:46 AM
|- - Gert1973   QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ Sep 20 2023, 11...   Sep 21 2023, 05:01 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 21 2023, 04:01 PM) ...   Sep 21 2023, 06:43 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, I prepared a take and for the first ti...   Sep 28 2023, 12:00 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 28 2023, 11:00 AM) ...   Sep 28 2023, 01:21 PM
|- - Gert1973   QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ Sep 28 2023, 02...   Sep 28 2023, 02:06 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Sep 28 2023, 01:06 PM) ...   Sep 28 2023, 02:21 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi again Monica, Very productive day today I ...   Oct 6 2023, 03:23 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Oct 6 2023, 02:23 PM) H...   Oct 6 2023, 05:24 PM
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- - Gert1973   And I'm back again!! One broken st...   Oct 27 2023, 05:13 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Oct 27 2023, 04:13 PM) ...   Oct 27 2023, 06:12 PM
|- - Gert1973   QUOTE (Monica Gheorghevici @ Oct 27 2023, 07...   Oct 28 2023, 08:59 AM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Oct 28 2023, 07:59 AM) ...   Oct 28 2023, 12:03 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi Monica, Back with a new (killer in my opninion...   Nov 14 2023, 01:16 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Nov 14 2023, 12:16 PM) ...   Nov 14 2023, 02:07 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hello Monica, This take was posponed last week du...   Nov 27 2023, 01:47 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Nov 27 2023, 12:47 PM) ...   Nov 27 2023, 02:41 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hi again Monica, And yes... I also have prepared ...   Dec 8 2023, 01:13 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Dec 8 2023, 12:13 PM) H...   Dec 8 2023, 02:20 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hello Monica, Second attempt on full speed of thi...   Dec 27 2023, 01:10 PM
|- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Dec 27 2023, 12:10 PM) ...   Dec 27 2023, 02:31 PM
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- - Gert1973   Hello Monica, I present to you REC attempt number...   Jan 7 2024, 02:25 PM
- - Monica Gheorghevici   QUOTE (Gert1973 @ Jan 7 2024, 01:25 PM) H...   Jan 7 2024, 03:11 PM
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