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Feb 9 2013, 01:20 AM
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Hey guys!
So Ive not been looking at lessons on here because I keep doing stuff like this... really should go back to the lessons! Anyway let me know what you think. I rushed it a bit and everything was done tonight so it needs work but Im happy with it so far https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/demo-song |
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Feb 10 2013, 06:47 PM |
Sounds awesome to me! But still, its not catchy I'm afraid. Remember; less is more. Try not to make the lead parts long and not catchy then again, be careful not to make your song too repetitive.
Have you checked out David Wallimann's lesson on Melody Writing? Here: https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/melody_writing/ |
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Feb 11 2013, 04:27 AM |
Nice ideas there! I enjoyed your playing on this one. I also agree with Cosmin about the individual ideas, I think that you could work a bit more on the theme, define more the sections (verse / chorus) to get a catchier track. By the way this is very promising!
Keep on sharing your music with us! Thanks. -------------------- My lessons
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Feb 11 2013, 01:09 PM |
How about creating a few theme ideas from the song, sharing with us all and then we can see which one is the catchiest? Let the listeners be your catchiness barometer on this one - deal? This is a great idea!! -------------------- My lessons
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Feb 11 2013, 03:08 PM
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Thanks guys, I have a couple of ideas but you will have to wait till next week when I get my recording stuff back. Just so you guys know, Im going to be using these for an EP I will be using for my college course, I have another song I posted here before I know a couple of you heard but Ill let you hear it again.
I need feed back for my course anyway so this is great for quotes and peoples opinions https://soundcloud.com/liammacl45/another-day-unfinished This is the first one, I prefer this one but I really need to work on the backing and solo in particular but I have a few months to get it all done so should be fine |
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Feb 12 2013, 08:28 AM |
Hehe, well if you are conscious of it, that's very good - now the question is, when can we hear the next version?
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Feb 13 2013, 04:21 PM
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Hehe, well if you are conscious of it, that's very good - now the question is, when can we hear the next version? Probably about a week and a half |
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Feb 13 2013, 11:02 PM |
That sounds just great to me Will be looking forward to this
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