The Obsessive Devotion, New Song With New Gear
The Uncreator
May 2 2009, 01:39 AM
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Hey guys, Spent the last 2 days recording this song. Originally it was gonna be a single song about 17:30 long, But I chopped it up, The way this song ends, it just feels like a song on its own, not part of something else. Its about 7:00, and I got to use my friends nice new expensive soundcard on it laugh.gif

Personally I can't tell if its made too much a difference, Im hoping some more critical ears might hear an improvement.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy this first part of this story! Here are the lyrics.

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The Obsessive Devotion
Book 1: To Divided Skies
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Alone around the fire, The mariner heard this tale
A traveling hermit came to him, And told him of this land
Beautiful and vast, Beyond all imagination
The Mariner laughed away, At the Hermits conviction

But sprouting from his hand, As if a rose by a tree
Came a flower so enchanting, The Mariner had never seen
Its petals bloody red, Its vines poisonous green
It beauty seemed contagious, more vivid than all my dreams

Alone around the fire, The mariner heard this tale
A traveling hermit came to him, And told him of this land
Beautiful and vast, Beyond all imagination
The Mariner was enraptured, By the hermits conviction

Across all seas, At the edge of the earth
Where no soul save mine has seen
A light at the end, Shows the path
To your heaven, The way that you seek

No gold is needed, No task is asked
Your efforts are all that I need
Make your way to where the sky divides
Leave now young Mariner


That very day, The Mariner set sail
Enchanting flower, Contagion of beauty
Men pushed far, Past their limits
To the brink of death we go

The Hermit in silence, Watches him sail
On his endless journey
His body collapses with a roar
Sinking deep into the sea

Where is this light that he told me of?
I see nothing but stormy skies
I have crossed a thousand horizon
And no land has ever been seen


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Canis
May 2 2009, 01:57 AM
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Sounds badass!
Sounds better then some studiobands! *Cough* Metallica *cough*

You've got some awesome riffs in there. Yet another great piece of work from you, great job!

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The Uncreator
May 2 2009, 02:35 AM
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Thanks man I'm glad you liked it, I spent alot of time on it and I'm glad it shows smile.gif

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