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Mar 7 2008, 12:16 PM
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ok, me and my bassist friend have managed to do an acoustic cover of land of confusion.
im not happy with the vocals but theyre ok for now... they will be changed. feedback and constructive critesism is welcome  
Us___Land_Of_Confusion.mp3 ( 4.63MB )
Number of downloads: 198This post has been edited by muntahunta: Mar 7 2008, 07:10 PM -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Mar 7 2008, 12:47 PM
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That's one of the greatest songs ever made and the video was so amusing - now I'm talking in general about Genesis version and their video, not your video
 I think you did a great version. At first I didn't hear the bass but with headphones it's there. Good sound and everything. So to the constructive part: Vocals are cool but I think a little bit cleaner would be better for this, not all clean but starting out clean and putting on the whiskey/smoke voice when it takes off, that'd be something. There is anotherthing, I don't know how to describe it right. There are parts where both guitar, bass and vocals work against eachother. Like at 1:51 it sounds ill to my ears. Also at around 0:47-0:48 (throughout the entire song but that's an example) i'm expecting the chords to be stressed elsewhise, at 1-2-3-4 rather but when they are stressed at 1.5 or 1.25 or whatever it makes the listening experience aqward to me. ..and I'm the customer so I'm always right. Hear hear, I though it sounded good over all, and keep the vocals just cleaner in the beginning if you want to please me, it just takes up more lines for the constructiveness And I was so happy to hear this song, it's been a while, I rather listen to your version that the one from Disturbed, but Genesis you'll never beat mwahahaha 
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Mar 7 2008, 12:50 PM
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I havent heard the original, but i really think this sounds great. Nothing sounds better than acoustic guitars
And i actually love the voice! Great job. |
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Mar 7 2008, 12:59 PM
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thanks guy's
im not a fan of the vocals there... and there are times when the guitars/bass are messed up, but were not making a big fuss, its just a bit fun  i was just working on cleaner vocals there but i ran outa time, ive got work to do... maybe another day i love the disturbed and genesis version of this song... whatever you do, dont listen to the "in flames" version. its like taking a brilliant song and putting it in a blender. -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Mar 7 2008, 01:27 PM
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QUOTE (muntahunta @ Mar 7 2008, 12:59 PM)  i love the disturbed and genesis version of this song... whatever you do, dont listen to the "in flames" version. its like taking a brilliant song and putting it in a blender. haha I didn't even know they made a cover. I promise I'm staying away from that one. Rock on!  Here's Genesis It's fantastic, both song and video. Funny dolls and teriffic sarcasm, I enjoy both
This post has been edited by MickeM: Mar 7 2008, 01:35 PM -------------------- My bands homepage
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Mar 7 2008, 01:37 PM
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Now back to topic, I'll post the video elsewhere - sorry
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All time favourites: B. Streisand - Woman in Love, M. Hopkin - Those were the days, L. Richie - Hello |
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Mar 7 2008, 01:49 PM
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haha, no problemo
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Mar 7 2008, 07:13 PM
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ok, the vocals have been changed
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Mar 8 2008, 12:02 AM
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wow...In the aspect of singing I got nothig to add...seriusly..man you can sing:)......keep em coming.....
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Mar 8 2008, 12:10 AM
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Whew what a differance for the entire song! Those vocals does the song and it's message justice very fitting, great performance - top notch!
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All time favourites: B. Streisand - Woman in Love, M. Hopkin - Those were the days, L. Richie - Hello |
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Mar 8 2008, 01:21 PM
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I didnt get to hear the first version, but as far as the vocals go.. this is GREAT!
Wanna sing on one of my songs?  The bass and guitar do crash a bit though, and one of the strings on the bass seems to be a bit out of tune, but all in all.. good stuff This post has been edited by Trond Vold: Mar 8 2008, 01:22 PM -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio
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Mar 9 2008, 02:36 PM
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lol, i'd love to sing on one of ur songs
cheers for the comments guy's i prefer this version to the last version i recorded -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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