Shadows Of The Horizon, Chapter 1: Heartless Eyes of Senses |
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Jan 12 2009, 10:53 PM |
Shadows of the Horizon Chapter 1: Heartless Eyes of Senses There he stands… The haunted figure of the shadow colossal The disturbed look upon the sweetness of mankind The aching scars of uttered pain Remember, the mark of the fallen swan you overpowered Really reminds of the game shadow of the collosus, just because of those 2 words . Aside from that, this is a great intro, I love the line "Remember, the mar of the fallen swan you overpowered". Millions of way to interpret that kind of line, I love it. Jealousy The taker of profound belongings The creator of sinful and dark rage Lingering as a lost soul inside a poisoned mind Forever, shall I wish the sculptures you embrace Buried as the abyss that longs for the wakening Hatred The unique keeper of the true angels of the world Deprived of love and warmness of the heart The follower of reason and objectivity King of all living creatures, inside of all Living forever as the one that will avenge The mermaids trapped in the cruel oceans "Hatred, The unique keeper of the true angels of the world". Another great line that can be seen in so many different ways, The uses of the mermaids trapped in the cruel oceans is another great one as well. This song is just full of great metaphors Heartless He who never had a heart can never have a soul Only the empty room that surrounds him with nothing Trapped in the closet, seeking the light for his brother And the darkness for all the rest Imposing the Glory of others as his own work And nothing else is just… Only lust of foolish puppeteers Forever Shall I wish that death joins me As the power in my hands to take what you love the most COPYRIGHTS: FILIPE ROCHA @2009 This marks the first chapter of a very complex story of feeling which I'm starting to write. It might not make any sense to people because it explains the feelings of two characters: Myself and my alter ego. Also the relationship is far to complex to explain so, just feel free to make your own judgements All in all, I love this piece, I think its your best so far easily. Sorry I missed it before, I thought I had commented on this. But anyway, I love how you have "Hatred, Jealousy, Heartless" before the verses. Gives it a storyteller quality that I really like. c4c? https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=23359 |
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