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The Cry Of Loneliness (original Composition) (christian Rock Solo)

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 11 2013, 04:42 AM
Feb 11 2013, 04:42 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Hey GMC this is my new Song I've been working on It has that instrumental rock/metal style to it but is a christian Rock hope you like ..... also if anyone is interested in seeing a backing track to this ; ) been thinking about it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1UIX-rlRZ8...eature=youtu.be You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

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Jonas Tamas View Member Profile	Feb 11 2013, 08:16 AM
Feb 11 2013, 08:16 AM	GMC:er Posts: 243 Joined: 30-January 13 From: Budapest, Hungary	QUOTE (Vulpine @ Feb 11 2013, 04:42 AM) Hey GMC this is my new Song I've been working on It has that instrumental rock/metal style to it but is a christian Rock hope you like ..... also if anyone is interested in seeing a backing track to this ; ) been thinking about it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1UIX-rlRZ8...eature=youtu.be Hey Vulpine, I've listened to your song, and you have a great feel for catchy riffs and melodies. Both the opening riff and the main melody are very strong and enjoyable. The playing could be a little more tight, but you're on a good way for sure! Apart from playing very tightly, I would experiment more with the drum loops, creating more variations and drum fills. A little volume rise for the drums would be a great idea too. All in all, a good song indeed, it has a Satriani-vibe which is a great thing. Congrats and keep us posted if you have more songs! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- jonastamas.com facebook.com/jonastamas

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Feb 11 2013, 10:06 AM
Feb 11 2013, 10:06 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey mate! As Jonas said, you have a good sense of melody, but you need to focus on a few things: - tightness - some of the phrases and the riffs are a bit out of timing in respect to the drum track - some bends are not reaching the correct pitch - you tend to lose direction and thus stop the flow of the piece with some phrases You are on the right track though! Keep experimenting as you got what it takes to make good music! Let's see the next one, shall we? Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Feb 11 2013, 01:30 PM
Feb 11 2013, 01:30 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	Hi Vulpine! I like the feeling of this new song. There is something with the rhythm guitar (the flanger riff) that doesn't convince me. At first, it seems that it's not perfectly tight with the drums, maybe you can move it a bit in your daw? or re-record it? Also the equalization is too bassy and makes the overall mix too full, so check the EQ of that guitar! By the way the track is good, it just needs some adjustment! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 11 2013, 04:50 PM
Feb 11 2013, 04:50 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Hey guys , Gabe, Jonas and cosmin I appreciate the feedback and tips as always = ) and this particular track I wanted to get some feedback on other fellow musicians if you all would like to hear a backing track to this = ) just ask You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Feb 12 2013, 08:30 AM
Feb 12 2013, 08:30 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey man, nothing to it - just make sure you make a little list with all the suggestions and re-record this piece having them in mind You can post the backing track here, so that anyone who wants it can have it at ease Keep rocking mate and let's hear some more music! Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

PosterBoy View Member Profile	Feb 12 2013, 11:04 AM
Feb 12 2013, 11:04 AM	Learning Roadie Posts: 3.179 Joined: 26-October 11 From: Galway, Ireland	I got a satriani/buckethead vibe from this. As others have said the phrasing could be tighter, that would really bring it up another level. and just to be awkward, without lyrics what makes it Christian Rock? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My SoundCloud Gear Tyler Burning Water 2K Burny RLG90 with BK Emeralds Fender US Tele with BK Piledrivers Epiphone 335 with Suhr Thornbuckers PRS SE Custom 24-08 Ax8 Fessenden SD10 PSG Quilter TT15

Dieterle View Member Profile	Feb 12 2013, 01:37 PM
Feb 12 2013, 01:37 PM	Learning Apprentice Player Posts: 1.324 Joined: 21-March 12	Interesting theme and feeling and i like to listen to it ! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Feb 12 2013, 05:57 PM
Feb 12 2013, 05:57 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	QUOTE (PosterBoy @ Feb 12 2013, 10:04 AM) I got a satriani/buckethead vibe from this. As others have said the phrasing could be tighter, that would really bring it up another level. and just to be awkward, without lyrics what makes it Christian Rock? I also wanted to ask that but I was a bit afraid You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

PosterBoy View Member Profile	Feb 12 2013, 09:48 PM
Feb 12 2013, 09:48 PM	Learning Roadie Posts: 3.179 Joined: 26-October 11 From: Galway, Ireland	As a worship leader I think I can get away with asking, I'm genuinely curious what the answer will be You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My SoundCloud Gear Tyler Burning Water 2K Burny RLG90 with BK Emeralds Fender US Tele with BK Piledrivers Epiphone 335 with Suhr Thornbuckers PRS SE Custom 24-08 Ax8 Fessenden SD10 PSG Quilter TT15

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 13 2013, 01:53 AM
Feb 13 2013, 01:53 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Good Question Posterboy and I guess to share this ill say that I havent played this song in a church or anything and I dont sing or write lyrics but in my heart this solo /song was dedicated to Jesus I was reading a book called "No wonder they called him savior" and As I was reading a certain chapter in the book that was called "the Cry of Loneliness" that talked about a women named Judith bucknell who died in a homocide but lived a lonely life they kept her diary which pretty much to sum it up in a nutshell always longed for someone everyone around her had a spouse or husband or friends for that matter except her I was reading the end of the chapter it made me realize that there prolly alot of "Judith Bucknell's" out there who are longing for something or someone and are lonely and I personally can relate, but the chapter reminded me that Jesus who was once alone as he was dying for us as he was being mocked and had to endure all of that for our sins as he layed their on the cross I was reminded that He too understands what it is like to be alone. so I Dedicated this solo to my savior and to me thats what makes this song a "Christian Rock" and I will most likely be composing more songs dedicated to God the song I shared with you guys a few months ago "Forever in your arms" also a dedication = ) check it out if you havent You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Vulpine: Feb 13 2013, 01:54 AM

Todd Simpson View Member Profile	Feb 13 2013, 01:59 AM
Feb 13 2013, 01:59 AM	GMC:er Posts: 25.297 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA	Congrats on putting a spiff track together! Each one is a victory and a lesson all by itself. Has a great vibe to it As was mentioned, you seem to lose synch with the beat during certain parts, (around 22 seconds is where I first heard it) and some bends are a tad shy, but all this can be fixed with a bit of practice and a quick re record! Todd QUOTE (Vulpine @ Feb 10 2013, 10:42 PM) Hey GMC this is my new Song I've been working on It has that instrumental rock/metal style to it but is a christian Rock hope you like ..... also if anyone is interested in seeing a backing track to this ; ) been thinking about it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1UIX-rlRZ8...eature=youtu.be You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- EVERY QUICK LICK! http://bit.ly/quicklickswithtodd MY INSTRUCTOR FORUM MY SHRED JOURNEY (BOOTCAMP) LESSON NOTES/TABS MY INSTRUCTOR PROFILE @ GMC ME @ YOUTUBE.com ME @ Instagram.com ME @ TWITTER

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 13 2013, 02:08 AM
Feb 13 2013, 02:08 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	BACKING TRACK feel free to try it out = ) https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/cry-of-loneliness-backing The rhythm part im playing an E add9 to a G#5 (or Ab5 however u look at it) so the Key is in I look at is as Ab minor You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Vulpine: Feb 13 2013, 02:14 AM

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 13 2013, 02:34 AM
Feb 13 2013, 02:34 AM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	Thanks Todd this started out as an improv and from their alil edit and some melodies I had in mind as I was putting the solo part together , the first measure or two was roughly improv.almost nonchalant and I left it there almost on purpose but I felt the later parts of the solo would show more feel and emotion and the feel of the song would begin to grow So thats how I approached it and It's one of the things I see Buckethead and Joe satriani do both both of which im heavely influenced by ... Buckethead would sometimes play some Diminished stuff or wholetone stuff and then he'll resolve it with something nice or Joe satriani will go from a minor sounding mood to a happy sounding mood like "revalations" where it starts off slow then gradually progress , now I know I have a long way to go to playing like them but I enjoy the journey You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Vulpine: Feb 13 2013, 02:38 AM

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Feb 13 2013, 08:54 AM
Feb 13 2013, 08:54 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey mate - nice story behind the song Usually, pieces of music that have a clear source of inspiration, will carry a message with them which can be perceived by people. Sometimes they will get the message you wanted to transmit, other times they will understand their own version - in the case of instrumental melodies, that is. But nevertheless, you will transmit something Good work and keep on sharing with us You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Vulpine View Member Profile	Feb 14 2013, 02:01 PM
Feb 14 2013, 02:01 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Feb 13 2013, 07:54 AM) Hey mate - nice story behind the song Usually, pieces of music that have a clear source of inspiration, will carry a message with them which can be perceived by people. Sometimes they will get the message you wanted to transmit, other times they will understand their own version - in the case of instrumental melodies, that is. But nevertheless, you will transmit something Good work and keep on sharing with us Thanks Cosmin means alot to hear that You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Feb 14 2013, 02:08 PM
Feb 14 2013, 02:08 PM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Nothing to it man Just keep on writing music and things will come into place better each time! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

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