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Dinaga View Member Profile	Jun 2 2012, 11:32 PM
Jun 2 2012, 11:32 PM	Learning Tone Seeker Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina	Here's a new version. Now the first part sounds fuller. I changed the configuration of the filter and the amps on the heavy part, but it still isn't as good as the guitar in FrontlineGuitar's video. I'm not satisfied with balacing the volume channels but I can't listen to this anymore right now, my ears are bleeding! Too much is too much I guess. I guess everything could have be recorded and mixed a whole lot better. http://soundcloud.com/dino-trnka/dino-trnka-new-song-v3 You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Connect with me! My Facebook My YouTube channel My band Dolia

Opetholic View Member Profile	Jun 3 2012, 09:18 AM
Jun 3 2012, 09:18 AM	Learning Guitar Lord Posts: 803 Joined: 2-May 12 From: Holland	Wow D-Man, I am really digging this piece Especially the first 1.19 mins, until the heavy bit. I would have liked that part to last longer, another minute or two maybe. I wanted to ask the following: there is a piano section between 0:17 and 0:32 seconds. Could you maybe try to increase the volume of the piano there a bit so it is in front of the drums ? Just a general listener's suggestion Otherwise, wow hehe big fan here ! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! --------------------

Dinaga View Member Profile	Jun 3 2012, 12:21 PM
Jun 3 2012, 12:21 PM	Learning Tone Seeker Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina	QUOTE (Opetholic @ Jun 3 2012, 08:18 AM) Wow D-Man, I am really digging this piece Especially the first 1.19 mins, until the heavy bit. I would have liked that part to last longer, another minute or two maybe. I wanted to ask the following: there is a piano section between 0:17 and 0:32 seconds. Could you maybe try to increase the volume of the piano there a bit so it is in front of the drums ? Just a general listener's suggestion Otherwise, wow hehe big fan here ! Thanks so much man! You are right, the piano definitely needed a boost, but I didn't have the nerve to do it yesterday I fixed the volume levels so here's the YouTube version. I might post a play-through of the song because it's much more interesting to watch that way... We'll see Thanks all for great feedback on this one! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Connect with me! My Facebook My YouTube channel My band Dolia

Opetholic View Member Profile	Jun 3 2012, 12:31 PM
Jun 3 2012, 12:31 PM	Learning Guitar Lord Posts: 803 Joined: 2-May 12 From: Holland	Man, very nice! You are quite talented and you have some really nice ideas. I would want to see some long epic pieces by you This one ends too fast, making you want to hear more You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! --------------------

VilleFIN View Member Profile	Jun 3 2012, 06:45 PM
Jun 3 2012, 06:45 PM	Tone Seeker Posts: 1.430 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland	Oh yes this turned out quite a piece ! And like I said in previous post that it's really nice to hear different music from GMC:er Although I was expecting more mixing to the drums and (as a DfH user I notice almost all of those drum fills 'cos I have used them too ). But hey how do you compose those solos ? They're quite amazing ! Do you just play what comes into mind or plan before hand what to play ? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My SoundCloud My Youtube videos My Facebook page

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Jun 3 2012, 07:56 PM
Jun 3 2012, 07:56 PM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	This is even better now you've added some killer solos ! All hail the D-Man You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Dinaga View Member Profile	Jun 4 2012, 10:54 AM
Jun 4 2012, 10:54 AM	Learning Tone Seeker Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina	QUOTE (Opetholic @ Jun 3 2012, 11:31 AM) Man, very nice! You are quite talented and you have some really nice ideas. I would want to see some long epic pieces by you This one ends too fast, making you want to hear more Glad you liked it mate! I wanted this to be longer too but for the first song I thought to keep it simple® But in the future I will make something longer QUOTE (WeePee @ Jun 3 2012, 05:45 PM) Oh yes this turned out quite a piece ! And like I said in previous post that it's really nice to hear different music from GMC:er Although I was expecting more mixing to the drums and (as a DfH user I notice almost all of those drum fills 'cos I have used them too ). But hey how do you compose those solos ? They're quite amazing ! Do you just play what comes into mind or plan before hand what to play ? Haha, yes Drums from Hell are overused but they sound so sweet And I did modify a number of them to fit the song About the solos - well the basic ideas usually come from my improvisations and messing with the guitar but after I get a solid idea I plan the rest to be fitting! There really isn't a concrete formula in my solos, sometimes I play what I think sounds right with the BT and sometimes I deliberately want to use a specific scale/technique and then play in that direction. QUOTE (Ben Higgins @ Jun 3 2012, 06:56 PM) This is even better now you've added some killer solos ! All hail the D-Man Yay! Now for the next one, which I'll start after the exams. It will surely be a lot different than this one, I want to explore different areas of music with each new song Stay tuned You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Connect with me! My Facebook My YouTube channel My band Dolia

derper View Member Profile	Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM
Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM	Learning Tone Master Posts: 691 Joined: 8-November 11 From: Portland Oregon	DUUUUUDE!!! That's awesome! It's the return of Dinaga!! "He can out shred you, even with a hand injury!!" - Coming Soon, to Theaters everywhere! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my awesome Nintendo Cover-band, EMULATOR!! http://www.reverbnation.com/emulator Now.....go practice!!

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Jun 5 2012, 09:07 PM
Jun 5 2012, 09:07 PM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	QUOTE (derper @ Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM) DUUUUUDE!!! That's awesome! It's the return of Dinaga!! "He can out shred you, even with a hand injury!!" - Coming Soon, to Theaters everywhere! Haha !! DINAGA : Hand of God Out now !! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Dinaga View Member Profile	Jun 5 2012, 09:52 PM
Jun 5 2012, 09:52 PM	Learning Tone Seeker Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina	Hahaha, you guys really cracked me up You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Connect with me! My Facebook My YouTube channel My band Dolia

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