QUOTE (BiGBeN @ Jan 6 2007, 01:23 AM)
the lyrics just popped in my head one night
when i was trying to get to sleep
so i got up wrote the main body of
the song down then put some chords to it
the next day, then recorded it through
my shitty little head set mic.
i'll accept all crits and probly deserve them
but if anyone has suggestions just give me a shout !
Haha, nice lyrics! Ok, your rhythm playing was choppy, but I could hear where you are going with the chord progression so just get your timing and strumming under control. Believe it or not the raw material is there, vocals sounded fine for the mood of the song, and I believe once you get your rhythm down you can focus on vocals more while your guitar part is on autopilot.
Congrats it's not easy to write any song! Where's the tab??
john
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