New Stuff Would Like Critique :), would like your thoughts |
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New Stuff Would Like Critique :), would like your thoughts |
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May 24 2013, 09:07 AM |
hey guys I haven't posted ina while and i've been practicing a lot still. I got inspiration and made this over some days! apart from guitar stuff i've been trying to improve on the video part of it which my buddy helped me with. It would be too hear your overall thoughts on this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uP2OZsfp08Y Thanks! |
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May 24 2013, 01:58 PM |
Hi mate! Good video!! Those first sweeps sound very good! I can notice that you have been practising. Every sections sounds good and the overal tone and mix are very good. The only things that I think your song lacks is a leit motiv or main melody that makes it more catchy. Are you planing to record vocals for this one?
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May 25 2013, 08:35 PM |
if you can look back at instrumentals that are memorable , there is usually a hummable lead line that is catchy, like this this is essential for the listener to bond with the song , if the listener can't bond with the song ( no matter how good it is)it will just sound like a bunch of notes. The arps. at 50 seconds need to be connected better, for what my opinion is worth Good example! Joe Satriani can create great and catchy rock songs without vocals. -------------------- My lessons
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May 26 2013, 06:03 PM |
Let's try this: pick a chord progression and try to build a theme which you are sure I will NOT forget and post the video here! Deal?? This sounds like a great plan! Looking forward what Enlo will post here! Cosmin is right, something simple but effective is what will make your song memorable. Look at the classic songs that we all like and enjoy, and sing, and play all the time... songs by Beatles, Rolling Stones, riffs by Metallica, Led Zeppelin. However this is not as easy as it sounds, it also needs to be practiced as well as technique. -------------------- My lessons
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May 29 2013, 08:01 AM |
I am really looking forward to see what you come up with, so please post here as soon as you are happy with the result, ok?
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Jun 5 2013, 02:47 AM |
Ciao Marco! As usual, your skills are always better and better technique wise, but as Gabe said, you need to start focusing on creating structures and motifs that will slowly build up a song. Keep rocking my friend! Cosmin! this took a bit but I came up with this little melody thing, it's crap because i just started it and its only that idea lol https://soundcloud.com/enlo22/test just wanted to hear your thoughts because I tried to make something "catchy" |
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Jun 5 2013, 02:56 AM
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Cosmin! this took a bit but I came up with this little melody thing, it's crap because i just started it and its only that idea lol https://soundcloud.com/enlo22/test just wanted to hear your thoughts because I tried to make something "catchy" thats fantastic, catchy, The thing about this line is- its easily remembered, I can now bond with this song and insert my own lyrics over the melodyWell done |
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