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[Eat-Sleep-andJam]

Dedicated to anyone who has ever faked a smile:




I'll be like this forever.
You say " Change", and I say "Never"
Rather be alone,
Then sit here begging at your throne.

I see the dissapointment,
Falling of your shoulders,
"Im sorry Mom, Your kid's growing older"

Wish you were here,
When I needed you.
Its said to say,
That music is the only one,
Who understands who Ive become.


I sleep on a bed of nails.
Your criticisms cut me in a time of rest.
When I awake in the moring,
I feel theres nothing left.

So let me bleed out,
Let me become something less.
Just keep playing your games.

Appearences mean everything,
I know I look happy,
But inside,
Im the only one who knows how I feel,
With a broken heart that still hasnt healed.



©John Minoia 2008

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[Dejan Farkas]

Nice poem, I like the way you developed the topic

One small remark, the rhythm of the lyrics.. you have different rhythms in one poem, like you compose a song in diferrent time signatures, you start in 4/4 then move to 3/4, then to 5/4.. it would sound confusing.. words shall flow like a river

Otherwise, it's really good

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