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Jun 9 2019, 02:21 PM
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Hello Rids! This is your thread to share your videos and receive feedback.
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Jun 10 2019, 04:56 AM
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Hi Rid!
I've enjoyed the feel of your instrumental song. I mostly enjoyed the last section that has two lead guitars mixed. It made me think on John Frusciante's solo albums. I've listened with attention and with my guitar on hands each of your solos, and my comments will be mostly global because I find the same elements that I recommend focusing to polish your soloing. Some of these comments can be subjetive but I'll share everything that comes to mind in order to help you to get the most from my feedback. - Guitar Tone: I feel that your guitar sound has too much gain. This makes your guitar sound noisy, and without dynamics. I think that you'll still maintain sustain but get a more enjoyable sound if you try lowering your gain / drive settings. - Fast passages cleanness: I notice that you have had sync issues when playing fast alternate picking patterns. These are not easy at all, and require special practice to sound consistent. You can find some very useful AP exercises in my Intensive Technique Course. The legato licks (Satriani style), also can sound cleanner and more defined. - Note choices: I think that you need to put some focus on "following the chords" techniques in order to avoid starting or ending your melodies in notes that doesn't sound totally suitable over the sounding chord. In many cases you stay on 4ths, while hitting a 3rd would be a goal. The solo for the collab ends on a wrong note but this happens because it's not an easy backing. It moves from D dorian to D Mixolydian. Working on this will make your playing much more melodic. - Polish your vibrato and bending techniques. These are not bad, but some bends doesn't reach the pitch smoothly and some vibratos don't sound natural. Let me know what you think! -------------------- My lessons
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Gabriel Leopardi Rids Thread Jun 9 2019, 02:21 PM
Rids Awesome! Thanks my friend!
So here we go ... Jun 9 2019, 07:00 PM Rids Excellent!
Just the kind of feedback I needed ... Jun 10 2019, 10:28 AM
Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Jun 10 2019, 06:28 AM) When... Jun 10 2019, 02:53 PM Rids QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jun 10 2019, 01... Jun 10 2019, 05:07 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Jun 10 2019, 01:07 PM) It... Jun 11 2019, 04:16 AM
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Rids So here's a new solo in E minor.
Chord tone s... Jun 12 2019, 03:12 PM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rid,
I notice improvements in the elements tha... Jun 12 2019, 03:47 PM Rids Excellent!
Thanks for the guidance.
It's f... Jun 12 2019, 10:37 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Jun 12 2019, 06:37 PM) Exce... Jun 13 2019, 02:39 PM
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Rids It's father's day. So happy father's d... Jun 16 2019, 09:39 AM Gabriel Leopardi Nice to see you playing from your heart mate.
... Jun 16 2019, 09:36 PM Rids QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jun 16 2019, 08... Jun 17 2019, 08:06 AM
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Gabriel Leopardi Hi mate!
I think that you can get much more f... Jun 17 2019, 06:53 PM Rids Frustrated with the instrumental I was working on ... Jun 22 2019, 07:25 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rid, nice feeling here!
The things tha... Jun 23 2019, 06:22 PM Rids I've been experimenting with plugins.
I took t... Jun 29 2019, 09:52 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids! Great to see you experimenting over ... Jun 30 2019, 09:48 PM Rids I'm using a kind of Marshall plugin.
What do ... Jul 14 2019, 08:26 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids! I also like your tone here! I wo... Jul 15 2019, 03:53 PM Rids All right, more delay here for my take on the new ... Jul 16 2019, 07:34 PM Gabriel Leopardi Nice mate! I also like the live vibe here, and... Jul 17 2019, 02:40 PM Rids Done!
Thanks for the kind words. Jul 17 2019, 04:02 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Jul 17 2019, 12:02 PM) Done... Jul 18 2019, 08:32 PM
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Rids Hi Gab,
here's a new improvised solo for you ... Jul 19 2019, 08:54 PM Gabriel Leopardi Hi mate! Great to see a new video from you... Jul 19 2019, 09:34 PM Rids Thanks for the comment!
For the melody, I li... Jul 20 2019, 09:11 AM Gabriel Leopardi Great mate.
Mateus was just an example that come ... Jul 20 2019, 11:34 PM Rids Hi Gab,
I just uploaded two videos for "Jam ... Aug 11 2019, 11:05 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi mate,
I think that your tone has improved a lo... Aug 12 2019, 02:41 PM Rids QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Aug 12 2019, 01... Aug 12 2019, 06:57 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Aug 12 2019, 02:57 PM) I... Aug 13 2019, 02:02 PM
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Rids All right here's a new one.
As always looking... Aug 16 2019, 11:46 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids, good job here!
I can see interesting... Aug 16 2019, 03:25 PM Rids QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Aug 16 2019, 02... Aug 16 2019, 11:54 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Aug 16 2019, 07:54 PM) I wi... Aug 18 2019, 12:35 AM
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Rids So here's my new improv.
I made this one with... Aug 28 2019, 11:39 AM Gabriel Leopardi Nice mate! I like this melody! It made me ... Aug 28 2019, 02:07 PM Rids Great and thanks for the link.
Very good guitar pl... Aug 29 2019, 07:33 AM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Aug 29 2019, 03:33 AM) Grea... Aug 29 2019, 03:53 PM
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Rids Thanks for giving me some new things to listen.
H... Sep 7 2019, 09:21 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids! Great to see you trying some funk... Sep 7 2019, 11:21 PM Rids QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Sep 7 2019, 10... Sep 7 2019, 11:26 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Sep 7 2019, 07:26 PM) No ex... Sep 8 2019, 07:21 PM
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Rids Just added the first one in my practine routine... Sep 9 2019, 05:17 AM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Sep 9 2019, 01:17 AM) Just ... Sep 9 2019, 02:18 PM
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Rids I put the links to the videos for the new collab h... Sep 11 2019, 06:57 PM Gabriel Leopardi I love them mate. I'm ready to record my resp... Sep 12 2019, 02:11 PM Rids Thanks my friend!
Your response is top notch... Sep 12 2019, 05:23 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Sep 12 2019, 01:23 PM) Than... Sep 13 2019, 02:42 PM
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Rids Something different with this blues improvisation ... Sep 15 2019, 09:00 AM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids! Great to see you experimenting with s... Sep 15 2019, 10:11 PM Rids Most of the time I find the melody by ear after li... Sep 16 2019, 01:43 PM Gabriel Leopardi Great! I think that you have nice ideas there,... Sep 17 2019, 02:37 PM Rids Excellent lesson.
A lot of licks to steal for sure... Sep 22 2019, 11:39 AM
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Gabriel Leopardi I'm very familiar with this backing. Again, I... Sep 23 2019, 02:45 PM Rids I will certainly learn from them. Sep 23 2019, 08:00 PM Gabriel Leopardi QUOTE (Rids @ Sep 23 2019, 04:00 PM) I wi... Sep 24 2019, 01:34 PM
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Rids Hi Gab,
I've been workong on Ben's Land o... Oct 13 2019, 07:38 PM Gabriel Leopardi Hi mate! Great to find a new jam from you... Oct 13 2019, 08:30 PM Rids When working on my bending technique it's ok b... Oct 20 2019, 06:01 PM Gabriel Leopardi Hi Rids,
Great to see you working hard. I also t... Oct 21 2019, 02:22 PM
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