Fear Of The Wolf
Owen
Dec 3 2007, 06:32 PM
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=== Fear Of The Wolf ===

Inconquerable fear
We burn inside our decieved senses
We slew our own brotheren
For the voices whispering in our minds

We breathed life to the wolf
Said to be prowling in our gardens
The voices reminded us
Of its sudden reality

And so we unlocked the path of liberty
With the key the voices gifted us
Our freedom ran as wild
As our imaginations

We were forced to leave our comfort
Delving into the neverending forest
We listened on petrified
As a fearful howling ensued

Our paced quickened,
Like our nervous heartbeats
We ran like an autumn wind
Brisk, panicked
Rushing our lifespan
Until the year drew to a close

Yet we struggled on for the light ahead
It's white absolution
Tasting our weakened flesh
We believed we had found our peace
A little taste of heaven

And so the darkness enslaved us
An invisible fear savaging us
Light dissolving into nothing
The voices laughed inside our heads
Capitalising off our foolishness
Our belief of the fifth column
Our fear of the wolf

We are all slaves now
Working day in and out
Trapped in a mine of self pity
Harvesting our own sorrow
The voices never stopped laughing
A hidous cackle reminding us
Of how we had and lost everything

Our lives... fade to darkness

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© Owen Waldron 2007 smile.gif


Criticise as appropriate, see if anyone can guess as to the relation of the overall metaphor of the piece to real life. biggrin.gif

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Owen
Dec 4 2007, 11:01 PM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Dec 4 2007, 01:55 PM) *
I like alot, i can imagine some pretty awesome riffs over those wink.gif


Thank you, If I ever get round to writing some I'll let you know laugh.gif

It'd be cool also if you could post some of your stuff up!

(I've been dying to see some stuff by yourself, the saddo that I am cool.gif wink.gif )

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- Owen   Fear Of The Wolf   Dec 3 2007, 06:32 PM
- - OrganisedConfusion   QUOTE (Owen @ Dec 3 2007, 05:32 PM) === F...   Dec 3 2007, 06:37 PM
- - Owen   QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Dec 3 2007, 09...   Dec 3 2007, 06:41 PM
- - Rated Htr   Let''s see what I think === Fear Of The ...   Dec 4 2007, 09:43 PM
- - Owen   Thanks, I think this is a good example of how ...   Dec 4 2007, 10:02 PM
- - Rated Htr   True, I would tell you what mine mean, but I prefe...   Dec 4 2007, 10:23 PM
- - Owen   QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Dec 4 2007, 01:23 PM) ...   Dec 4 2007, 10:30 PM
- - The Uncreator   I like alot, i can imagine some pretty awesome rif...   Dec 4 2007, 10:55 PM
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