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Oct 6 2009, 01:11 AM |
Here's an "updated version" with a little lower volume before the chorus Oh, and the sound is better, as the last one was quite sharp! [attachment=18269:UVB_NEW.mp3] Iluha: I mixed the guitars a bit differently this time, and I believe they sound great. So hopefully you'll like them as well, and if not I hope you can tell me why and what I should do to make them better. It does matter, because I want this song to turn out great Oh, and the bass is your part, so make it shine I'm also thinking about writing another riff to break up the song, to make it more interesting. I'll let you know what I got after a few days, and in the meantime you and he others are free to help me out with ideas and suggestions for how it should sound Munta: The first riff is the Chorus (Played as an intro). The two next ones are either verse and bridge, or interlude and verse. I vote for verse and bridge, but I'll let you decide as you're the one writing lyrics Then the Chorus comes again at the end. Sounds good? Oh, and if anyone has some suggestions on how to make this even better, please share im loving the sound of this and the structure sounds great, I have 1 suggestion though. I think the part before the chorus should be halved in length, so rather than the 16 bars, make it 8 bars. I think I could add a more punchy path into the chorus with that being a little shorter -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Oct 6 2009, 07:31 PM |
Sounds like we have the song structure almost figured out, I want like one more section for a bridge where the song reaches a climax
Any ideas |
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Oct 6 2009, 10:04 PM |
That's what I'm working on But please, if anyone have any ideas on how it should be (as my idea might not please everyone, who knows? ), spit it out maybe after a chorus it could quieten down into a short drum/bass part maybe with some small guitar parts with lots of effects (delay/chorus, maybe a phaser? lol) and then a short stop for a beat or two, then into a powerfull booming breakdown followed by a chorus? -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Oct 13 2009, 02:52 PM |
Any updates guys?
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Oct 18 2009, 03:57 PM |
Meh, I'm kinda stuck atm..
I'll work some more on it tonight though Any ideas from the rest of you guys? |
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Oct 18 2009, 06:19 PM |
unfortunatly not my pod x3 just broke (well, the power cable) so ive gotta get a new one before i can record
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Oct 18 2009, 06:40 PM |
Nothing here man sorry
me and my family just moved to a new house, and me and my band finished recording our first album(got masterd today) so Iv'e been preety busy lately.. |
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Oct 20 2009, 02:53 AM |
No prob, I've been busy lately as well, this week I will try to put something together
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Nov 3 2009, 09:44 PM |
okay, sorry for the delay guy's my pod now has a new powerpack and i shall be recording some stuff soon
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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