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Feb 21 2009, 05:57 PM
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Wow, production is really high quality. Like that atmospheric....atmosphere:)
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No, just kidding, sounds great, and indeed very very profesional. I dunno how you did it, but your voice sound very full.
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Feb 22 2009, 05:05 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Feb 21 2009, 03:06 PM)  Thanks for the detailed song sections description Trond - I am currently trying to figure out how to put it together! I have done a first attempt at "chorus version 2" - I have marked new stuff in red: [attachment=13835:moment_o...e_draft2.mp3] When any given moment of truth Gets buried in your lies I disappear in silence A moment of silence Shot through my head This moment turns red You're so lovely and sad Shame, your will has gone bad In the dawn is where we meet And you know just what I need... A moment of silence, a moment of silence! In the dawn is where we meet And you know just what I need... A moment of silence, a moment of silence! [guitar interlude here?] 02:08 There's a simple rule: what gets concealed will always and never be revealed, I need...just a moment So live your life just to live a lie and die just in time to hide the truth, I need...just a moment There's a simple rule: what gets concealed will always and never be revealed, I need...a moment of silence! The idea here is to make the "empty" section before the red-marked chorus 2, into a guitar interlude section - I think the guitar melody is strong. (maybe that would require a different mixing of the lead guitar) I could have a go at some lyrics there as well - but I feel it's pretty crowded with lyric stuff already (of course if we remove the intro lyrics things might feel different). By the way - if you want to me to send you some files so that you can have a go at throwing things around, let me know! Nice!  I think your on to something for the Chorus 2, the only thing i didnt fully "agree" with was the second "just a moment". Maybe the voice should follow the chord progression there more closely with maybe som more words inserted. I really liked the stuff you did right before chorus 2! It blended in quite nice and helped set a mood. and yes.. would love to get some files
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(there is lots of great material).
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Mar 12 2009, 10:02 AM
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Wow, Trond you did it again! And this time so differently, insanely good and atmospheric like always!
 Very great!Oh, and Kris did a great job too!
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Apr 29 2010, 05:22 AM
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Now THAT was stellar! Loved it! Like everybody is saying..."great atmosphere!" Catchy too!
This post has been edited by thefireball: Apr 29 2010, 05:23 AM |
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