Canon Rock, Update |
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Canon Rock, Update |
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May 29 2009, 12:15 PM |
Nice video Tolek !
I like the feel of the whole video, but there are parts you can work on (intro and faster sweeps). Excellent vibrato ! |
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May 29 2009, 01:53 PM |
That one hand part wasn´t really clean here... Needs more muting. Maybe I should put my right hand on the lower strings? Sure, on lower frets. Sounds like a plan! |
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May 29 2009, 01:55 PM |
Thanks a lot, Pedja. You welcome Tolek ! Overall you need to work on it but I am sure in couple of days you can have this perfected |
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May 29 2009, 03:51 PM |
You welcome Tolek ! Overall you need to work on it but I am sure in couple of days you can have this perfected I totally agree with the feedback given so far, and would like to add that your showman instincts are right on, just need to practice the timing and cleanliness. Also totally agree with the right-hand as a mute on the lower frets; it won't lose any of the "wow, one hand!" effect at all. I look forward to seeing video from the live show! -------------------- ::jafomatic
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May 29 2009, 11:10 PM |
Good, but your timing is bad at few places(difficult parts), you need to fix that!
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May 30 2009, 12:24 AM |
Thanks for the feedback.
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May 30 2009, 10:50 AM |
Great played
As for feedback, I feel everything has been said You might want to relax a bit more while playing sweeps.. I got the impression that you were extremely tense and kinda pushed your hand hard downwards instead of sweeping I may be mistaken, though -------------------- GMC is not just a website... It's a lifestyle!
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May 30 2009, 11:53 AM |
I think that will go down a storm mate! Pretty awesome trak to learn that mate, take a bow!
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May 30 2009, 12:01 PM |
I think that was awesome Tolek, as Kaz pointed out only guitarists in the audience would find room for improvement, but it's an overall great take. Inspiring. I wish I can play that one some day
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May 30 2009, 12:04 PM |
Well your succes depends on who the audience is - if it is 600 schoolmates who listen to D'n'B and Hip Hop, they will love this - they dont know whats timing issue, sloopy sweep etc.. They just hear you play it in a VERY good way.
If you are playing to 600 musicians tho, you will have to work hard to fix those few messups (not much of them). Problem with these are, they take ages to get rid of:D Thats the difference between normal and professional audience. Common guys came to hear good tunes and want to enjoy the music - they can enjoy only as much as you do:) Pros want to hear perfection, they are looking for comparison, new ideas etc.. To conclude it- those are just a small nuances in overally greatly played performance. Its not about being technical genuis. Its about soul which you can put into it and that matters This post has been edited by Jakub Luptovec: May 30 2009, 12:06 PM -------------------- my youtube account with riffs and ideas: https://www.youtube.com/user/Phoenygzus
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May 31 2009, 11:08 AM |
I agree with what Jakub said it was a good performance and by the time you have to perform you will definately work out all the kinks . nicely done man Thanks. |
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May 31 2009, 04:18 PM |
Very good job with the Canon rock Tolek! Vibrato has indeed improved, sounds much more stable now! Keep rockin mate, I'm sure the audience will love this!
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