Recording My Comp, In a studio |
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Recording My Comp, In a studio |
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Feb 19 2014, 04:33 PM |
Hey everyone !
A few weeks ago , I posted some of my ideas ( some blues slide stuff) , and with my school , we were doing a project (a cd) where whe recorded some original songs and covers. I sent this track to the teacher : https://soundcloud.com/rteuman-1/composition He said that I can imporove this thing and we were gonna record it , so I changed it a bit and today we made a demo for the guitar parts with a loop . And we'll record drums and bass also next week . Here's the guitar demo : https://soundcloud.com/rteuman-1/composition-demo-guitar-track What do you think ??? This post has been edited by Renan: Feb 19 2014, 04:34 PM |
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Feb 19 2014, 06:08 PM |
Tone and groove are pretty good. Also your intonation with the slide is excellent.
I'd personally like to hear at least one real chord change that last for at least two bars. Similar to what you do at 3:06 but earlier in the tune. Is there a melody (vox or inst) that goes over all that? -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/foolin-the-clouds https://soundcloud.com/klasaine2/surfin-at-the-country-hop Soundcloud assorted ... https://soundcloud.com/klasaine3 New record ... http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/kenlasaine Solo Guitar ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...5iIdO2tpgtj25Ke Stuff I'm on ... https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLXZh...b-dhb-4B0KgRY-d |
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Feb 20 2014, 02:30 PM |
Hi Renan, nice composition! I already discovered your great composing abilities in our creativity workout but here I can see that you are also very versatile. It's interesting to see how this one is evolving. Keep on sharing the process if it's possible!
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Feb 21 2014, 08:25 AM |
Thanks ! Maybe I should add some melody Melody, yes, but the whole direction of the song is equally important What sort of structure did you follow when writing this? |
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Feb 26 2014, 06:31 PM |
We finished the recording today , I'll soon get the track and upload it here.
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Feb 26 2014, 07:08 PM |
We finished the recording today , I'll soon get the track and upload it here. Great! Looking forward it. -------------------- My lessons
Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel |
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