New Song In Progress, Feedback would be very appreciated |
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May 27 2012, 06:49 PM
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Hi guys!
I haven't made a new song for a long time so right now I'm experimenting and trying to make something which would be a mix of neoclassical and modern metal approach.  Sounds weird but I haven't heard anything like this before so I wanted to give it a shot  Here's the first version - what I made so far. The middle section only contains orchestration and drums, I'll fill the middle section with some neoclassical-inspired lead guitar parts later, right now there's just one little solo in the beginning. As you will probably notice, I took use of the multiple-guitar panning (maybe even overused it? in one part there's four guitars there stacked ) in the last part, but also in the intro solo.I'm also not sure about the drums right after the intro solo - it sounds a bit too flashy, maybe I'll put a simpler approach there... It is supposed to have fast guitar parts to serve as a transition to the double-kick theme (the middle part). The song's far from complete, it will be longer - I'll continue composing after the heavy part... What do you think? Please point out any flaws you encounter, I'm here to learn  Any feedback would be highly appreciated, thanks a lot! http://soundcloud.com/dino-trnka/dino-trnka-new-song This post has been edited by Dinaga: May 27 2012, 06:57 PM |
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Jun 2 2012, 11:32 PM
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Here's a new version. Now the first part sounds fuller. I changed the configuration of the filter and the amps on the heavy part, but it still isn't as good as the guitar in FrontlineGuitar's video.
I'm not satisfied with balacing the volume channels but I can't listen to this anymore right now, my ears are bleeding! Too much is too much I guess. I guess everything could have be recorded and mixed a whole lot better. http://soundcloud.com/dino-trnka/dino-trnka-new-song-v3 |
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Dinaga New Song In Progress May 27 2012, 06:49 PM
WeePee I liked when the heavy part kicked in \m/
B... May 27 2012, 07:41 PM Ben Higgins Sounds good Dino !! I would just keep goin... May 27 2012, 07:53 PM Opetholic Wow D-man, it is great! You are very talented.... May 27 2012, 09:35 PM Dinaga QUOTE I liked when the heavy part kicked in ... May 27 2012, 09:49 PM
Ulrik I really like it!
You should get an opera sin... May 27 2012, 09:59 PM
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DeGroot I like the intro solo! Your note selection/sc... May 27 2012, 10:41 PM Cosmin Lupu D-man, this is great everyone had great input, so... May 28 2012, 03:28 PM Gabriel Leopardi I like the concept of this piece of music man. Yo... May 28 2012, 04:59 PM Dinaga QUOTE I really like it!
You should get an ope... May 28 2012, 08:39 PM Dinaga I created the second half of the song.
I'm g... May 30 2012, 12:22 AM WeePee QUOTE (Dinaga @ May 30 2012, 02:22 AM) I ... May 30 2012, 04:56 PM SpaseMoonkey This is almost like Apocalyptica on guitar! ... May 30 2012, 06:25 PM
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Ben Higgins I love the second part - very cool ! You'r... May 30 2012, 09:38 AM FrontlineGuitar Hey there Dinaga!
I think whatever I would sa... May 30 2012, 06:30 PM Dinaga Hey guys!!
Thanks a lot for your comments... May 31 2012, 09:44 PM Cosmin Lupu Mate, I like where this is going, but for the riff... May 31 2012, 10:09 PM Dinaga QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ May 31 2012, 09:09 P... May 31 2012, 10:18 PM
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derper Sorry to get in on this so late, but I really dig ... Jun 1 2012, 09:10 PM Cosmin Lupu Hmmmm, I'll look it up and see what's goin... Jun 1 2012, 09:13 PM
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WeePee Oh yes this turned out quite a piece ! And lik... Jun 3 2012, 06:45 PM Ben Higgins This is even better now you've added some kill... Jun 3 2012, 07:56 PM Dinaga QUOTE (Opetholic @ Jun 3 2012, 11:31 AM) ... Jun 4 2012, 10:54 AM derper DUUUUUDE!!! That's awesome! ... Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM Ben Higgins QUOTE (derper @ Jun 5 2012, 07:34 PM) DUU... Jun 5 2012, 09:07 PM
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Dinaga Hahaha, you guys really cracked me up Jun 5 2012, 09:52 PM
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