Song 1 (heavy)
audiopaal
Sep 17 2009, 12:24 AM
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Hi guys.

I recorded an intro to my initial idea, and added drums and bass..

This is what I've got so far: Attached File  Song_1.mp3 ( 3.29MB ) Number of downloads: 527



Please tell me what you think about it so far, what you'd like to change etc..? smile.gif

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audiopaal
Oct 5 2009, 08:54 PM
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Here's an "updated version" with a little lower volume before the chorus smile.gif
Oh, and the sound is better, as the last one was quite sharp!

Attached File  UVB_NEW.mp3 ( 4.21MB ) Number of downloads: 267


Iluha: I mixed the guitars a bit differently this time, and I believe they sound great. So hopefully you'll like them as well, and if not I hope you can tell me why and what I should do to make them better. It does matter, because I want this song to turn out great smile.gif Oh, and the bass is your part, so make it shine biggrin.gif

I'm also thinking about writing another riff to break up the song, to make it more interesting.
I'll let you know what I got after a few days, and in the meantime you and he others are free to help me out with ideas and suggestions for how it should sound smile.gif

Munta: The first riff is the Chorus (Played as an intro). The two next ones are either verse and bridge, or interlude and verse. I vote for verse and bridge, but I'll let you decide as you're the one writing lyrics smile.gif Then the Chorus comes again at the end. Sounds good?

Oh, and if anyone has some suggestions on how to make this even better, please share smile.gif

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- audiopaal   Song 1 (heavy)   Sep 17 2009, 12:24 AM
- - Rated Htr   Nice Intro Audio! Very melancolic entrance...A...   Sep 17 2009, 12:32 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Sep 17 2009, 01:32 AM)...   Sep 17 2009, 06:26 AM
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- - Jose Mena   Awesome audiopaal great stuff, not much I could ad...   Sep 17 2009, 05:35 AM
- - MickeM   Again, great sound from the AMT   Sep 17 2009, 08:20 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (MickeM @ Sep 17 2009, 09:20 AM) Ag...   Sep 17 2009, 08:52 AM
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- - Iluha   bass sounds a bit off at the intro but easy to fix...   Sep 17 2009, 09:13 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 17 2009, 10:13 AM) bas...   Sep 17 2009, 09:25 AM
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- - muntahunta   wow, im liking this more and more just a questio...   Sep 17 2009, 03:06 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (muntahunta @ Sep 17 2009, 04:06 PM...   Sep 17 2009, 03:28 PM
|- - muntahunta   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 17 2009, 03:28 PM)...   Sep 17 2009, 04:01 PM
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- - Iluha   It sounded more like a chorus than a verse.. and t...   Sep 17 2009, 07:19 PM
- - audiopaal   I liked that If it'll be verse or chorus we ...   Sep 17 2009, 09:06 PM
- - muntahunta   im happy with that.... anyone heard from colonel d...   Sep 17 2009, 11:49 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (muntahunta @ Sep 18 2009, 12:49 AM...   Sep 18 2009, 07:57 AM
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- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 17 2009, 02:19 PM) It ...   Sep 19 2009, 04:48 PM
- - Jose Mena   So this is my suggestion, I had to do some drums a...   Sep 19 2009, 07:51 PM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Sep 19 2009, 07:51 PM)...   Sep 19 2009, 09:24 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 19 2009, 10:24 PM) Tha...   Sep 19 2009, 10:20 PM
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- - muntahunta   jose, thats awesome   Sep 20 2009, 03:06 AM
- - Iluha   5 days with no progress? I think it's time to ...   Sep 25 2009, 10:22 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 25 2009, 11:22 AM) 5 d...   Sep 25 2009, 12:22 PM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 25 2009, 12:22 PM)...   Sep 25 2009, 01:49 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 25 2009, 02:49 PM) Gah...   Sep 25 2009, 02:38 PM
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- - muntahunta   yea, sorry guy's ive been very busy lately, ha...   Sep 26 2009, 07:25 PM
- - muntahunta   come on guy's we cant let this one fall throug...   Sep 30 2009, 12:13 AM
- - Iluha   Where's Jose?...   Sep 30 2009, 01:43 AM
- - audiopaal   As I said, I'm gonna record something this wee...   Sep 30 2009, 07:37 AM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 30 2009, 08:37 AM)...   Sep 30 2009, 02:00 PM
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- - Jose Mena   Hey Guys I am here I've looked at your posts,...   Oct 2 2009, 08:55 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 2 2009, 09:55 PM) ...   Oct 2 2009, 08:56 PM
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- - audiopaal   Well, here's an updated version as promised I...   Oct 4 2009, 08:03 PM
- - Jose Mena   Good Stuff Audiopaal, The structure of the song is...   Oct 4 2009, 08:38 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 4 2009, 09:38 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 08:41 PM
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- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 4 2009, 03:41 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 08:54 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 4 2009, 09:54 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 09:02 PM
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- - muntahunta   im in love with this!!! haha I do nee...   Oct 5 2009, 01:50 PM
- - Iluha   I'll be honest, the sound of the recording isn...   Oct 5 2009, 05:13 PM
- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 4 2009, 04:02 PM) ...   Oct 5 2009, 07:03 PM
|- - muntahunta   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 5 2009, 08:54 PM) ...   Oct 6 2009, 01:11 AM
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- - Iluha   Well my biggest problem is the bass sound, I can...   Oct 6 2009, 03:02 AM
- - Jose Mena   Sounds like we have the song structure almost figu...   Oct 6 2009, 07:31 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 6 2009, 08:31 PM) ...   Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM
|- - muntahunta   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM) ...   Oct 6 2009, 10:04 PM
|- - Jose Mena   Any updates guys?   Oct 13 2009, 02:52 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 13 2009, 03:52 PM)...   Oct 13 2009, 10:50 PM
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- - audiopaal   Meh, I'm kinda stuck atm.. I'll work some ...   Oct 18 2009, 03:57 PM
- - muntahunta   unfortunatly not my pod x3 just broke (well, the ...   Oct 18 2009, 06:19 PM
- - Iluha   Nothing here man sorry me and my family just move...   Oct 18 2009, 06:40 PM
- - Jose Mena   No prob, I've been busy lately as well, this w...   Oct 20 2009, 02:53 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 20 2009, 03:53 AM)...   Oct 20 2009, 08:26 AM
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- - muntahunta   okay, sorry for the delay guy's my pod now has...   Nov 3 2009, 09:44 PM
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