Prison Of Mayhem (updated Wip), Symphonic Metalness - Feedback wanted |
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Nov 19 2012, 02:03 AM
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http://soundcloud.com/socky42/prison-of-mayhem
Added a bridge section, and improvised two solos with some string stuff near the end. At around 3:18, I did have a tremolo lead guitar doubling up with the strings, but it clashed too much, so any help with that would be great. You can actually hear the bass guitar now..sometimes >.> Probably overdid the octaver effect too much  Some bits are still sloppy, but im working on it. QUOTE And just for comparison, heres the old one.
http://soundcloud.com/socky42/prison-of-mayhem-wip-old This post has been edited by Socky42: Nov 19 2012, 02:05 AM |
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Nov 19 2012, 03:13 AM
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I'll just run through all the stuff I use.
Guitars - DI -> Overloud TH2 Drums - EZDrummer Metal Machine Strings - Symphobia (Kontakt Library) Bass - Spectrasonics Trilian |
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Nov 20 2012, 03:38 PM
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Hi mate, this piece is becoming something really cool. My only suggestion is to work a bit more on the mix (drums should be louder, strings quieter, and bass more audible) and also edit everything (mostly strings) to sound tighter.
Is this going to be an instrumental piece? or vocals are coming? -------------------- My lessons
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Nov 21 2012, 01:12 AM
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WOW! Socky you freakin RAWK man! If you are up for it, join my DIVINUS MORTUS project!!!! I"m digging your tune here bud, one thing I did notice, (just personal taste really ) the keyboard parts may be a bit loud during the first half of the song. Are you going for synthetic, obviously keyboard, bits, or are you wanting it to actually sound mor like an orchestra/string bit? QUOTE (Socky42 @ Nov 18 2012, 08:03 PM)  http://soundcloud.com/socky42/prison-of-mayhem Added a bridge section, and improvised two solos with some string stuff near the end. At around 3:18, I did have a tremolo lead guitar doubling up with the strings, but it clashed too much, so any help with that would be great. You can actually hear the bass guitar now..sometimes >.> Probably overdid the octaver effect too much Some bits are still sloppy, but im working on it. |
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