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Lydian Rock Ballad, Lesson By Guido Bungenstock
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BenF
May 1 2022, 07:31 PM
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Original lesson: Lydian Rock Ballad by Guido Bungenstock

Not finally there yet. Still need some polishing und improvement of the fast lick.

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Monica Gheorghev...
May 2 2022, 09:04 AM
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Hi Benny!

Your playing is always very pleasant to my ears. At this moment your take it's more a kind of a draft but is very promising. Now, because you have already got used with all the notes and positions, you can start focusing on details.

First of all, please, when you make a video, try to capture on the camera, your both hands. In this way, we can give you more complex feedback.

You already pointed out about fast licks, so I will skip this subject.

Be careful at the length of the notes. You tend to play some notes longer than they are (as an example: 0:36; 0:56, etc).
Also, listen to each section and see how long the final slide from a phrase is played. Try to notice where you have pauses between phrases and try to respect all these things.

You need to review the tab a little. You played some wrong notes (0:20; 0:46; 1:03; 1;09; 1:19).

0:14 - in this spot, you should play a pinch harmonic.

0:34; 1:06; 1:08 - I noticed that you never use the raking technique in your takes. Look, the raking is used to add a little percussive spice to the notes. Adding this tool, you can make a note to stand out and your playing will be more expressive. It's not hard to achieve this technique. All you need to do is to mute the strings of the guitar with the fretting hand and pick the muted strings in succession (like a sweep) until you reach the string that should be played.
Kris explained this technique perfectly. Take a look at his video ("Raking definition"):
https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/search/raking/

0:40 - you went with the slide on a wrong note. Also, you need to play this faster because it's not a normal slide, it's more a kind of an ornament.

0:47 - after the bend, play that note straight (no vibrato) and shorter to give the same flavor as Guido.

1:00 - you added a note

1:09 - this part sounds too square. Avoid adding more notes and bends. On this phrase you need to play only two bends. Keep in mind that any note added (or played longer/shorter) will change the lick rhythmically.

1:11 - 1:14 - this typical blues lick is not played in a good way. Be careful at the length of the last 3 notes and how they are played (pay attention to the rhythm).

1:20 - use the whammy bar on the last note.

As general advice, try to control the string noises better.

I'm sure you can manage all the details that I pointed out above. Today, you get a 6 from me.

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Kristofer Dahl
May 2 2022, 09:10 PM
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Very cool!

I agree with Monica that this feels like a draft take - but there are some extremely promising moments in here.

Just listen to your hand sync in the quicker run at 00:45. Use this passage as a reference for all your coming runs - if you consistently can achieve this kind of hand sync, Eric Johnson will soon come knocking at your door asking for advice.

Other than that there are also several moments when you vibrato shines.

Keep tweaking this take - and also pay attention to pitch accuracy. From 01:05 and onwards your pitch is mostly off which kills the musicality in your chops.

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Todd Simpson
May 3 2022, 05:31 AM
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Well done on learning this piece smile.gif The Lydian is a wonderful scale for expressive soloing. This lesson will provide you with a wealth of licks that you can take with you and use to create your own music, solos, etc. So every note you learn during rec will provide you with a stockpile of things to pull from as you advance.

As for this take, it does perhaps seems a bit premature but even so I think it's a good idea to submit a rec to get feedback on it, even before you are ready to do the final take. It's never to early to get some feedback and tips from folks so that you can continue to improve.

I strongly suggest video recording each take and uploading it to youtube as an "unlisted" video and keeping each rec in it's own playlist. That way you can keep a record of your progress on each REC. It's not until we watch a video playback of ourselves that we actually know what we played. Audio recording is good but video is always better imho since it lets you see your hands. To that end, as was mentioned, always try to get both hands in the shot if possible all the way through a song.

Monica did a great job of breaking down the performance and as usual her analysis is spot on. I would join Kris in saying that bending to pitch is a crucial skill that is worth spending time on. You can use a guitar tuner to check your bending to see if you are hitting the not you are actually trying to hit. This is just a way to visually get a reference unti your each is ready.

keep it up!!! smile.gif

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Gabriel Leopardi
May 3 2022, 02:02 PM
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Hello again mate!

I like that along with the DT-style rhythm lesson you're working on this solo that forces you to combine melodies, blues licks and some shred.

In this case I notice that it complicates you a bit when you have to play those fast alternate picking passages in John Petrucci style. Again I recommend an intensive work of Alternate Picking. (Let me know if you need help with that!)

Beyond that, I think that the melodic parts are on the right track and that you just need to keep listening to the original lesson to take in elements of dynamics, vibrato and phrasing that Guido uses to give it the necessary feel.

I think Monica has pinpointed for you the licks and phrases that need special attention. I would just like to add that it would be interesting if in addition to practicing the lesson, you spend some time experimenting with this scale mode on backing. Practice creating your own melodies and phrases, and if you dare combine them with some phrases from the lesson.

That's all, keep it up!

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Fran
Jun 21 2022, 12:57 PM
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Almost there, 5

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